for Naruto: sinnoh pokemon adventures8/19/2014 c1 DragonKing19
Nice
Loved it.
It is me Dragonking19.
I was GoldDragonNinja
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Nice
Loved it.
It is me Dragonking19.
I was GoldDragonNinja
Can ya add me to favorites?
9/12/2012 c3 
4Miseryisfun
Okay, I like Sasuke having Elekid pretty good, but I'm iffy about Grotle.
To be honest, you should've let Sasuke defeat Naruto, so it would drive Naruto to excel and train harder.
4MiseryisfunOkay, I like Sasuke having Elekid pretty good, but I'm iffy about Grotle.
To be honest, you should've let Sasuke defeat Naruto, so it would drive Naruto to excel and train harder.
8/22/2012 c2 3valkyrie post
I suggest you to write the sentences properly. U
Nevertheless, it was a fairly good plot.
3valkyrie postI suggest you to write the sentences properly. U
Nevertheless, it was a fairly good plot.
8/20/2012 c2 15NinjaFang1331
Thanks for the review and your right rock lee as the fight type gym leader and Hinata Hyuga as the water type gym leader is much better. Thank you!
15NinjaFang1331Thanks for the review and your right rock lee as the fight type gym leader and Hinata Hyuga as the water type gym leader is much better. Thank you!
8/19/2012 c2 4Tearhart
Sup. I lied, I've decided to see where this goes.
Not bad, but Hinata as the fighting type gym leader sounds lame. Make Lee the fighting type, and Hinata the water type.
Anyway, continue.
4TearhartSup. I lied, I've decided to see where this goes.
Not bad, but Hinata as the fighting type gym leader sounds lame. Make Lee the fighting type, and Hinata the water type.
Anyway, continue.
8/18/2012 c1 2Clintosaurus
This is a great start! i hope you update often! While it has a few grammar errors, it has a good plot and i hope i can see new updates or even another story by you. Good luck with writing new chapters, as they only get harder as they go.
2ClintosaurusThis is a great start! i hope you update often! While it has a few grammar errors, it has a good plot and i hope i can see new updates or even another story by you. Good luck with writing new chapters, as they only get harder as they go.
8/13/2012 c1 4Tearhart
I felt bad that this story had no reviews, and to be honest, I hate Narusaku with every fiber of my being.
But, everyone needs a review!
Sakura is slightly ooc, there's a few grammar errors in here, and you should've let the two of them meet on their journey, not from in the beginning.
But, it's okay for Narusaku fics. But I'm not going to continue reading, but just so you know...I never read Narusaku fics.
But I did yours.
4TearhartI felt bad that this story had no reviews, and to be honest, I hate Narusaku with every fiber of my being.
But, everyone needs a review!
Sakura is slightly ooc, there's a few grammar errors in here, and you should've let the two of them meet on their journey, not from in the beginning.
But, it's okay for Narusaku fics. But I'm not going to continue reading, but just so you know...I never read Narusaku fics.
But I did yours.