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9/5/2014 c3 26The Phantom Dragon
fluffies! more please!
7/23/2014 c3 Makoisthebabe
This was absolutely beautiful. Keep it up.
10/6/2013 c3 Guest
IT'S SO BEAUTIFUL, I'M GONNA DIE!
1/1/2013 c3 30ladybug114
that was awesome! i loved it sooo much :)
8/25/2012 c3 25SwampTreader
Why does this not have more reviews!? This was so good! I loved it and so well written! Nothing was corny or rushed and when Mako woke up!? Just wow that was some good writing I absolutely loved when Mako was waking up seriously! It was perfect and PERFECTLY described sooooo good
8/21/2012 c3 15wolfeclipse25
Great story! I loved the emotion displayed from Bolin; especially when he finally realized why Mako works so hard for him when he's sick.
8/15/2012 c2 Hachinoko
I LOOOOOOOVE YOU.

LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE YOU.

No shipping check? Check! Ossum characterization? Check! Feels? Check!

You have SUCH a knack for writing and I lav it. You write out all the little details and gestures so many authors miss, and it's great.

I eagerly the next installment!
8/13/2012 c1 JustSlightlyCrazy
Wow. You wouldn't believe how excited I got when I realised you had posted a new fic. :D And it was a Legend of Korra one too! :) I loved this! I am a major fan of Mako and Bolin's brotherly relationship, and you've managed to capture Bolin's character pretty accurately! :) Looking forward to the next chapter :) x
8/12/2012 c1 000000000000000000000Zero00000
Personally, I was never happy about how the creators handled the "city life" idea.

With Republic city came so many exciting backgrounds like prison, gangs, street fights, citywide events, races, police interference, urban exploration, etc., but instead all they focused on was the anti-bender rebellion and a plot that was too fast to explore the city itself, or the relationships between characters.

It's nice to see someone taking an interest in these things enough to write a well-written fic.

Thanks,


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