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Pennywise casually walking around in Derry? Bill killed her in the book.
Pennywise casually walking around in Derry? Bill killed her in the book.
8/14/2012 c1 
6nivet
So this is really short. Like it can be read in under a minute. Also are you saying things like frakking to be funny? Personally, unless you categorize this as a humorous fic, I think you should just go ahead and write fucking. Also, "Meanwhile in New York City in tony's pizza..." and "Storming out of the pizza shop, the warrior went to a place called Tony's Pizza...". Did you accidentally put the same place twice, or am I missing the joke? On the bright side, grammar and spelling isn't bad.
6nivetSo this is really short. Like it can be read in under a minute. Also are you saying things like frakking to be funny? Personally, unless you categorize this as a humorous fic, I think you should just go ahead and write fucking. Also, "Meanwhile in New York City in tony's pizza..." and "Storming out of the pizza shop, the warrior went to a place called Tony's Pizza...". Did you accidentally put the same place twice, or am I missing the joke? On the bright side, grammar and spelling isn't bad.