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2/17 c8 PhantomReader223
Hi, I'm mostly used to reading longer stories but I'm happy I decided to read this one it was a fun read thanks.
2/18/2020 c5 8multyfangirl21
Hmm, he could have said electrocution and they could assume either way , or even that he doesn't remember much of the insistent
11/3/2019 c8 YukinaBlueRose
I like it! ! ! ! O:D
6/3/2019 c8 Jacob Phantom
Please update your story soon!
4/25/2019 c8 1SofiPhan29
It was a good ending. It cracked me a smile ;3
2/15/2019 c5 11MindForged
God the writing of this story is awful.
1/5/2018 c8 LK2
Thanks for the story and please keep up the good work (-)
9/18/2017 c7 HTTYDGuest
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Batman . . . . APOLOGIZED?!
*Faints from shock*
9/1/2017 c8 13Sailor Dragonball 87
Great! Love Flash's commentary and your depiction of Wonder Woman's compassionate nature. Shayera goes by Hawkgirl, not Hawk Woman.
5/16/2017 c8 Phanten
Good story, just a bit blunt though
4/28/2017 c8 Onlylittle63
Great story, probably read this twice, but sorry to say it, crap ending. You had a good thing going, but then snap you ended it. No development, and now he considers a bunch of adults that are interrogating them family after his trust was shattered by his parents? Sorry, but I call f*cking bullsh*t. Add more character development and more relationship and plot development, make something happen. An interrogation is in fact not a way people heal. He needs to gain a sense of trust. And how did Skulker get Dani? You have a great idea, but add more, fix plot holes, them bam fantastic short story. (We don't even get to see him use the training room. That's my favorite part in these ;-;)
4/11/2017 c8 1Guillermo Riers
continue. you have a good thing going.
4/11/2017 c2 Guillermo Riers
I feel your pain sister. I too have braces and they're a pain in the ass
4/5/2017 c8 2Thebananathatwrites
I'm laughing too much at Flash I love it XD
3/20/2017 c3 2Killua Lawliet
Love this but its J'ohn J'onzz not Jo'hn Jon'zz and the Gost Zone is green w/ purple doors other than thouse two things though great story I really love ur work
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