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6/15/2014 c1 DeletedAccount3498
Wow, this is so good once again. I think you got Foxface's tone right, this sort of uncertain, grim, calculating tone that worked well for her character.

As I was reading, this reminded me of canon so much, and I think you made it really believable. Also, bonus points for the story flowing very well, and no grammatical, spelling or punctuation errors. I thought Foxface's views on the other tributes were REALLY interesting, especially Katniss. The way you pulled off how a secondary character thinks of the main character in the series is definitely intriguing, and so is the OC Voss Semah. He was quite believable, he had attributes and strengths which Foxface noticed, but not too less or too much to make him unrealistic.

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HybridsRose
3/30/2014 c1 13Blackjack the Nargle
Love it! 'Cato spends lonely and embarrassing afternoons chasing rabbits with a sword' xD
4/2/2013 c1 EvilEnchantress
I really like the way how you made Foxface think about the other tributes. This is god :)
2/11/2013 c1 1dreamzspark
yay :] this is a very well written oneshot, you really captured Foxface's character in my opinion :] i've always wanted to know more about her ... she's interesting :D great job xxxx
12/26/2012 c1 010127
" likes to hang out in trees"- I remembered that "honest trailer" video about hunger games, laughed a lot with this line. "hiding in trees, sleeping in trees, jumping from tress"... xD
" Voss Semah" - interesting name choice.
" and Cato spends lonely and embarrassing afternoons chasing rabbits with a sword" - hahahaha.
Was Tresh still alive when you described the remaining tributes?
Her meticulous view of everything, in my opinion, fits her character perfectly. I always wanted to know more about Foxface, since she's kind of charismatic. Thank you for this great fic about her.
9/9/2012 c1 this-profile-deactivated
Lovely! I'm so glad you didn't do the "Foxface killed herself!" thing, it bothers me to no end.
8/14/2012 c1 Joannecookie
This is a great story. You really show fix face's calculating mindset and makes her in character :)
8/13/2012 c1 2GaleOlivia
OMG YOUR WRITING IS ADDICTING TO READ:) Ok, love. So first let me say you are and AMAZING author. Original plots, great voice, and even better characterization. I cannot believe you are not published yet:/ Your style is so refreshing, I'd even compare you style to that of Suzanne Collins:) You plot has the PERFECT amount of romance, you're not overdoing it and you're not under-doing it. PERFECTO! Haha it would mean the entire WORLD to me if you reviewed my stories:) If not, I completely understand, and I will be seeing you on my television when you're recognized as "Best new author" Have a marvelous night, and please never stop writing:)

GaleOlivia;)
8/13/2012 c1 B
Very good story. Was hoping for a bit about the cheese, since Katniss made a big deal about it when she and Peeta got back to camp. All in all it adds up respectfully. :)
8/13/2012 c1 5Pinkbookworm7
This was great! I think you captured her personality very well.

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