8/4/2013 c1 AofP
Too lazy to login :)
Cute story...felt kind of bad for Scott but hey Teddy is rhe one right?
Couple of tips though:
1) Snape died in the deathly hallows, but if it's a bit AU you may want to mention it :)
2) You may want to change the rating. M implies mature themes so you'll get fewer readers and since this is more of a K that's a shame because you could be getting a lot more with a lower rating.
Just my thoughts, the story was really sweet x
Too lazy to login :)
Cute story...felt kind of bad for Scott but hey Teddy is rhe one right?
Couple of tips though:
1) Snape died in the deathly hallows, but if it's a bit AU you may want to mention it :)
2) You may want to change the rating. M implies mature themes so you'll get fewer readers and since this is more of a K that's a shame because you could be getting a lot more with a lower rating.
Just my thoughts, the story was really sweet x
7/27/2013 c1 26DelfineNotPadfoot
Very cute story! Poor Scott, though But thanks to him, Victoire is not torn between the two of them :)
Very cute story! Poor Scott, though But thanks to him, Victoire is not torn between the two of them :)
5/27/2013 c1 29LittlePlume
I love those two, and I loved the story you wrote for them.
It made my day ! Or my night beacause I should be asleep right now (Gosh, sometimes it's tiring to be french ;p )
Well, anyway, I enjoyed reading you a lot ;)
Lp.
I love those two, and I loved the story you wrote for them.
It made my day ! Or my night beacause I should be asleep right now (Gosh, sometimes it's tiring to be french ;p )
Well, anyway, I enjoyed reading you a lot ;)
Lp.
11/16/2012 c1 kairi
awesome
awesome