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2/3/2019 c8 Jay
Continue the series mate!
11/29/2018 c8 laraferreira
continua
3/19/2018 c1 rob.patterson.71
nice
11/25/2017 c2 Guest
No no NO!
11/25/2017 c1 Yolo29
Needs more adventure
6/5/2017 c8 Swirlygirl39
This story was awsome but a little off of the real thing but I'm now really sad that you stopped writeing it even if just for a little while.
3/7/2017 c8 8multyfangirl21
Hey!? Why the long pause between the last time you posted and now? I may not favorite this story due to how sickly sweet the lovebirds are but I do want to see what happens next since you changed it up some.
I'll be waiting for your next chapter.
3/7/2017 c5 multyfangirl21
sounds like there's at least 2 pokemon that they both have that can become mated pairs.
make that potentially 4.
sorry but , look up Bob Smiley when he talks about newly weds. i'm having the same reaction that he was because these two lovebirds are being just as sweet. i promise you'll likely enjoy listening to one of my favorite comedians if you look up what i suggested.
oh , yeah team Rocket and the male members of the trio. they're going to want to fight Gary when they find out the prettier of the two girls they have crushes on isn't single anymore.
3/7/2017 c3 multyfangirl21
So now Gary's noticing.
3/7/2017 c2 multyfangirl21
LOL, James and Meowth have crushes on Ash. Will the team Rocket trio split up later on because of that? BAHAHA! Misty is joining in catching James'attention as well. Who's next to start flirting with them Brock?
I wonder when the trio will find out that the girls are 14.
10/24/2016 c1 Azura64
please continue the process of the story
8/19/2016 c1 bowties456
Lol why can't they just be gay
8/15/2016 c1 Guest
I think you made her way to OP. All the Kanto starters and fossil Pokemon at the beginning? That's not realistic. You should follow the plot for Pokemon she catches. It's fine if she catches more, but try to stick to the plot. Also, you need more show not tell.
8/9/2016 c7 Guest
I couldn't continue reading because of the excessive fluff.
I mean I completely understand that couples can act that way when they first get together, but I was really hoping that Ashley and Gary would start acting a little more natural together. Like being so close that they start finishing each other's sentences, they start scolding each other when the other does something reckless, they start talking about Pokemon strategies together, they start wordlessly helping each other out. Most importantly I was hoping to hear them talking about Pokemon more than they talk about dates...
I guess I should say that the fluff should be toned down a little so we can see their natural personalities more...

And the tag team battle seemed a little... Forced...
12/27/2015 c8 Brinow
Omg, I love this story so much, it's going direct for my favorites, I hope the hiatus gets over soon :C I really can't wait for the next it is amazing.
I noticed one thing, on the latest there was less like dialogs, I like when ash and Gary talk and be together so much fluff 3 have you thought about a warning or on other place put some rating M 7w7?
Also on this episode I would have loved that only Ashy "died" would be nice to see Gary reaction towards a badly injured Ashy, so romantic 3!
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