for Total Eclipse of the Heart12/2/2021 c11 AzzIzz88
Wow, what a great and emotional story! I hope you'll find the time and motivation to finish it one day :)
Wow, what a great and emotional story! I hope you'll find the time and motivation to finish it one day :)
6/21/2020 c11 bunnykim89
I hope u continue this story because it is fascinating. I became hooked after the first chapter and bing read it. I love the concept and hope you update soon.
I hope u continue this story because it is fascinating. I became hooked after the first chapter and bing read it. I love the concept and hope you update soon.
5/5/2019 c11 optimistic alex
I am loving this story! The angst and heartache are making this a very hard story to stop reading. Please keep writing this awesome story!
I am loving this story! The angst and heartache are making this a very hard story to stop reading. Please keep writing this awesome story!
3/29/2019 c11 jupiter2005
Raye gets what she deserves for destroying whatever may have happened between Darien and Serena. I hope that Darien gets his divorce and makes things better for his son. Also hope that he can get another chance with Serena. Keep up the good work.
Raye gets what she deserves for destroying whatever may have happened between Darien and Serena. I hope that Darien gets his divorce and makes things better for his son. Also hope that he can get another chance with Serena. Keep up the good work.
3/9/2019 c11 Guest
Why dose rei care she is having an affair
Why dose rei care she is having an affair
3/9/2019 c11 
11TropicalRemix
i'm glad that he is finally divorcing raye. maybe he can fix things with serena.
11TropicalRemixi'm glad that he is finally divorcing raye. maybe he can fix things with serena.
3/5/2019 c10 SaturnnFoxx
OMG! I just found this and it’s so juicy. Love what you have and can’t wait for the next update!
OMG! I just found this and it’s so juicy. Love what you have and can’t wait for the next update!
2/9/2019 c10 Bky
This is the first time I read this fan fic, im so glad I found it! I read all avalable chapters in one day, its 4 am as I write this. I have neber hated Ray's character in any ohter story as much as I hate her in this... but then I feel sorry if it isball caused by mental imbalance... I think she probably knew Bennet was the name she used cause she seems to have kept a letter. I am anxiously awaiting next chapter, I hope everything is well with you.
This is the first time I read this fan fic, im so glad I found it! I read all avalable chapters in one day, its 4 am as I write this. I have neber hated Ray's character in any ohter story as much as I hate her in this... but then I feel sorry if it isball caused by mental imbalance... I think she probably knew Bennet was the name she used cause she seems to have kept a letter. I am anxiously awaiting next chapter, I hope everything is well with you.
1/20/2019 c10 1Yazlee7313
All I don't think I ever hate it so much a Raye right now.
I really hope that b gets whats coming to her
1Yazlee7313All I don't think I ever hate it so much a Raye right now.
I really hope that b gets whats coming to her
1/19/2019 c10 Guest
I hate reading about rei
I hate reading about rei