9/9/2012 c2 Guest
This is pretty good so far! Please, write more!
This is pretty good so far! Please, write more!
8/29/2012 c2 Idunn
I like your story so far, Kia seems to be an interesting character!
I like your story so far, Kia seems to be an interesting character!
8/28/2012 c2 Guest
this is different, i like it!
this is different, i like it!
8/18/2012 c1 Isobel
Yes, wow what a good story. This is something I wouldn't dare to write myself. Great start, please do continue. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Yes, wow what a good story. This is something I wouldn't dare to write myself. Great start, please do continue. Can't wait for the next chapter.