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8/1/2016 c6 Guest
I hope the new chapters come !
3/17/2013 c6 hunterthehuntress
i love it update soon please
11/23/2012 c5 hunterthehuntress
update soon please i love this
11/17/2012 c5 3CarlisleandEsme
Interesting, can't wait for more! :)
10/10/2012 c4 5Bekala
Well that was a really cool look into the past. I hope you keep up the alternating time lines it'll keep things interesting and it would be neat to see how things went in the beginning. I'd also like to see shots of the club while Husky was gone, that'd be really fun. Either way I'm a big fan of this chapter, not only the conversations but the way things played out and the mysterious voice at the end. I hope there's more to that coming soon? I also want to say the improvement in your writing from chapter one to here is awesome. Things were great from the beginning but it's obvious that you're more comfortable with your characters, your story, and your personal voice than you were before. I can't wait to see what you have coming up next.
10/10/2012 c3 Bekala
Sorry this took so long... Well that was adorable and a bit sad. I love how Husky still has a bit of a sense of humor, the first two chapters made me worried he was going to be the silent damaged type. I love that Gemma made the guest room a shrine and I can only imagine how ridiculous a framed kutte must look, at least to a living biker. So Chibs plays a bit rough? It's a cool character trait so I really approve. I also like that you've created a bit of conflict, everyone so far has been a bit upset but mostly friendly. It's interesting to see Tig as the one who's going to be the most upset. Well... on to chapter four.
10/3/2012 c4 1ozzysgirl
I love the fact that your fic is completely different from anything else I've read. your writing style is pretty good, very descriptive and not a little intense! keep it up
9/30/2012 c3 Guest
Yay. Finally you post. Took a while for me to find out you posted again. I'll explain later. I love double posts. This more than makes up for the time in between. Looking forward to more. Glad to see less grammar and spelling mistakes. Can't wait for the next chapter. Gerlock
8/26/2012 c2 17HaylsValo
Ah Bobby, you speak such words of wisdom! Hopefully Husky will take in what he said, process it and try to understand it because he's right, you don't run away to something worse. You run away to something better, easier. If he wanted to run away from everything, Husky would have just up and left, found himself a girl on the other side of the country, settled into a simple life... Can't wait to read more, especially interaction with Chibs and Clay :D
8/25/2012 c2 angel
good so far hope you update soon
8/25/2012 c2 gerlock
WOW. I am speechless. This has take the spot of my favorite fanfic. And I don't even watch the show. I love the storyline. I love the characters. I love it. The diction and syntax (lol. I love that class) Still some very small grammatical errors, but that is to be expected. Can't wait for the next chapter. Hurry up and post it. Btw I have some ideas to make it more popular. PM me because my phone is broke. Thank you for the shoutout and for taking my advice on the disclaimer.
Gerlock
8/25/2012 c2 5Bekala
Well that was a bit intense. I'm glad his military buddies were okay, will they be showing up sometime soon? I also like Bobby's perspective on your character and the situation. He's right it would be weird to run away to a war but sometimes SAMCRO seems like a war in itself so who's to say Husky wasn't trading one violent life for another. I also like how even in the middle of the scene Bobby couldn't help bragging about his muffins, haha. Can't wait to see what you have planned next!
8/19/2012 c1 gerlock
I love it. I have no clue who the chatacters are or how they got into this. But i love it. I hope whatever happened to him will be revealed in chapters to come. Keep up the good work. Gerlock
8/18/2012 c1 Bekala
First, so thrilled you finally got this up! Second, love it. I think you build suspense well and it pulls the reader in not really knowing what's going on yet. I really like the intro scene with Gemma, you had me fooled even though we talked about it. For a second there I thought they were going to get romantic and I really liked the sudden switch to mother and son. I can't wait for Tig to jump into the mix and I want to see where you're going with the Jax/Husky/Gemma thing I'm sure will develop. Love that Gemma slaps him and then cleans him up, haha. Can't wait to see where things are going, so many possibilities! Keep it up!
8/18/2012 c1 3CarlisleandEsme
wow! :)

cant wait for more!
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