11/19/2013 c8 3stephcullen2000
I love it so please update again soon and maybe read my latest story even if you don't watch the shows as you don't need to to read x
I love it so please update again soon and maybe read my latest story even if you don't watch the shows as you don't need to to read x
12/10/2012 c8 Guest
jess is a bit to mary-sue here. Saving the day while the soldiers stand by
jess is a bit to mary-sue here. Saving the day while the soldiers stand by
10/24/2012 c7 Guest
Im a bit disappointed we didnt see more jess worrying about becker here, weve had plenty of him worrying about her this story. Still maybe you have it planned for the next chapter. Heres hoping! Please update soon
Im a bit disappointed we didnt see more jess worrying about becker here, weve had plenty of him worrying about her this story. Still maybe you have it planned for the next chapter. Heres hoping! Please update soon
10/15/2012 c6 Guest
So now they have two dracorexes in the menagerie. They also have two diictodons and two Columbian manmoths...
So now they have two dracorexes in the menagerie. They also have two diictodons and two Columbian manmoths...
10/14/2012 c6 11WildGypsyWoman12
Yeah. Sorry about that. But Jess knocked out and a woman who's supposed to be dead... You can probably see how we jumped to that conclusion.
Still reading.
Yeah. Sorry about that. But Jess knocked out and a woman who's supposed to be dead... You can probably see how we jumped to that conclusion.
Still reading.
10/14/2012 c6 6primevalyank
Well i guess she isn't bad! What is she doing there? Curiouser and curiouser
Well i guess she isn't bad! What is she doing there? Curiouser and curiouser
10/2/2012 c5 Guest
It can't be Sarah. She's dead now, she died two years in July 2010.
Becker and Sarah led an SAS unit through an anomaly into the ruined Future City to save Connor, Abby and Danny who were all trapped in separate time zones.
But the team was ambushed by future predators. The predators stuck and the soldiers opened fire. The predators picked off most of the soldiers
Sarah under Backers orders, hid inside a derelict office tower filled with juvenile megopteran, flying insects and enemies of the predators
By the time he found her it was too late she was dead
It can't be Sarah. She's dead now, she died two years in July 2010.
Becker and Sarah led an SAS unit through an anomaly into the ruined Future City to save Connor, Abby and Danny who were all trapped in separate time zones.
But the team was ambushed by future predators. The predators stuck and the soldiers opened fire. The predators picked off most of the soldiers
Sarah under Backers orders, hid inside a derelict office tower filled with juvenile megopteran, flying insects and enemies of the predators
By the time he found her it was too late she was dead
10/2/2012 c5 11WildGypsyWoman12
Sarah? You're making Sarah evil? And she killed Danny? (or did I miss read that) Still how very dark of you? The plot thickens!
Sarah? You're making Sarah evil? And she killed Danny? (or did I miss read that) Still how very dark of you? The plot thickens!
10/2/2012 c5 6primevalyank
Uh-oh...has Sarah gone to the dark side? This story is getting quite interesting! I'm curious to see where you will take it!
Uh-oh...has Sarah gone to the dark side? This story is getting quite interesting! I'm curious to see where you will take it!
9/19/2012 c4 primevalyank
Oh good for Jess...she's not waiting for rescue, she's engineering it herself! Like this chapter
Oh good for Jess...she's not waiting for rescue, she's engineering it herself! Like this chapter
9/19/2012 c4 Guest
So now we have future predators locked up in a location and a loose Dracorex. Sounds like Patrick owns quite his own menagerie. Next he'll probably show us he has a mammoth
So now we have future predators locked up in a location and a loose Dracorex. Sounds like Patrick owns quite his own menagerie. Next he'll probably show us he has a mammoth
9/19/2012 c3 Mijo54
Et bien on sait qui et pourquoi Jess a été enlevé mais est ce qu'Ethan a l'intention de faire envahir l'Arc ou Londres par les prédateurs du futurs ?
à bientôt de vous lire !
Et bien on sait qui et pourquoi Jess a été enlevé mais est ce qu'Ethan a l'intention de faire envahir l'Arc ou Londres par les prédateurs du futurs ?
à bientôt de vous lire !
9/19/2012 c4 51Martin-J-Christopher-Freeman
Lol Jess figting Patrick/Ethan with a chair! Brilliant!
XD Update soon!
Lol Jess figting Patrick/Ethan with a chair! Brilliant!
XD Update soon!
9/6/2012 c3 11WildGypsyWoman12
geez. you're making him out to be another helen cutter. Really wished they'd continued that story some, but you're doing a good job.
geez. you're making him out to be another helen cutter. Really wished they'd continued that story some, but you're doing a good job.