for The Princess and The Avatar11/11/2012 c13 
1TheOrderOfTheWhiteLotus
well what is bothering aang? cant wait to see how their child would turn out; fire bender or air bender?
1TheOrderOfTheWhiteLotuswell what is bothering aang? cant wait to see how their child would turn out; fire bender or air bender?
11/10/2012 c12 1ZanaZ
Hiya! Loving the story so far. I wish I'd seen it sooner.
I like how both Azula and Aang both have their thoughts fleshed out and explained. I also like how you didn't make Azula completely out of character, which can be difficult in a romance fic. (Especially with her...ummm... 'social' difficulties. Lol)
Unfortunately, most AzulaxAang fics are one-shots with pure lemon. While those are fine for a bit, I'm glad yours has an actual meaningful storyline.
Criticism wise, all I can say is to proof-read a bit more. Basic stuff that spellcheck doesn't notice. And a bit more lovey-making stuff. When people see M romance they expect a bit more. I'm not saying go all out crazy sex, lol, just a bit more lemons in the mix.
Otherwise, great fic so far. Can't wait to read more. ]
1ZanaZHiya! Loving the story so far. I wish I'd seen it sooner.
I like how both Azula and Aang both have their thoughts fleshed out and explained. I also like how you didn't make Azula completely out of character, which can be difficult in a romance fic. (Especially with her...ummm... 'social' difficulties. Lol)
Unfortunately, most AzulaxAang fics are one-shots with pure lemon. While those are fine for a bit, I'm glad yours has an actual meaningful storyline.
Criticism wise, all I can say is to proof-read a bit more. Basic stuff that spellcheck doesn't notice. And a bit more lovey-making stuff. When people see M romance they expect a bit more. I'm not saying go all out crazy sex, lol, just a bit more lemons in the mix.
Otherwise, great fic so far. Can't wait to read more. ]
11/7/2012 c12 katia Ravenchild
Good luck on the tests and I really like this story. You should have her try to sing maybe that will bring her even more peace with her mother.
Good luck on the tests and I really like this story. You should have her try to sing maybe that will bring her even more peace with her mother.
10/29/2012 c12 1TheOrderOfTheWhiteLotus
great chapter! cant wait for an update im ususallly full out sokkla but im really loving your story. read it all today thru hurricane sandy! lol
1TheOrderOfTheWhiteLotusgreat chapter! cant wait for an update im ususallly full out sokkla but im really loving your story. read it all today thru hurricane sandy! lol
10/29/2012 c10 TheOrderOfTheWhiteLotus
great story so far. love this chapter because it builds up to the suspense... im reading your story during hurricane sandy lol.
great story so far. love this chapter because it builds up to the suspense... im reading your story during hurricane sandy lol.
10/27/2012 c12 indigomirror
This was a great chapter! Thank you so much for updating.
Good luck on your exam! _
This was a great chapter! Thank you so much for updating.
Good luck on your exam! _
10/8/2012 c11 BlueLion
Nice closure of the chapter - now only an epilogue or are you going to throw in another story twist?
Nice closure of the chapter - now only an epilogue or are you going to throw in another story twist?
10/1/2012 c10 2DangerouslySilent
This chapter was absolutly amazing! Love the fluff and now we get more conflict with Kuei (who needs a hobby)! I'm excited to see Azula to get them back. Kuei is really bitter about the invasion isn't he? Wow! Waiting for the next ch!
2DangerouslySilentThis chapter was absolutly amazing! Love the fluff and now we get more conflict with Kuei (who needs a hobby)! I'm excited to see Azula to get them back. Kuei is really bitter about the invasion isn't he? Wow! Waiting for the next ch!
10/1/2012 c10 indigomirror
Oh my goodness! Great cliff hanger. I will be biting nails as I wait for the next chapter _
Oh my goodness! Great cliff hanger. I will be biting nails as I wait for the next chapter _
9/30/2012 c9 indigomirror
I adore this story. The flow is great and the characters are believable. This particular pairing is becoming a favorite of mine, so I always enjoy reading different stories avout them. This is one of the best ones I have read. I look forward to reading it til the end.
I adore this story. The flow is great and the characters are believable. This particular pairing is becoming a favorite of mine, so I always enjoy reading different stories avout them. This is one of the best ones I have read. I look forward to reading it til the end.
9/22/2012 c8 Louise
Really enjoying this! Not usually an Azulaang sort of person but this is good. I'll keep reading to see where this goes. Keep it up.
Really enjoying this! Not usually an Azulaang sort of person but this is good. I'll keep reading to see where this goes. Keep it up.