for Lily Evans Fights First9/25/2017 c8 
3ObsessedWithHPFanFic
Great story and Lily really was the brightest witch of her generation even if she had some help. Thanks for sharing!
3ObsessedWithHPFanFicGreat story and Lily really was the brightest witch of her generation even if she had some help. Thanks for sharing!
8/13/2017 c8 Rune Tobor
Rowling made Snape evil in most of the books.
Her "plot twist" of making him good at the end was a failure.
Jo Rowling was imaginative, but didn't use common sense.
She would have an idea, put it in one of the books, an not think about the big picture.
In any civilized country, most of the purebloods would be in prison or executed.
The professors at Hogwarts failed to protect the students, an ordinary school would fire them.
Pain is not funny!
Someone else's pain and degradation is not funny!
I worry about Rowing's sanity...
Rowling made Snape evil in most of the books.
Her "plot twist" of making him good at the end was a failure.
Jo Rowling was imaginative, but didn't use common sense.
She would have an idea, put it in one of the books, an not think about the big picture.
In any civilized country, most of the purebloods would be in prison or executed.
The professors at Hogwarts failed to protect the students, an ordinary school would fire them.
Pain is not funny!
Someone else's pain and degradation is not funny!
I worry about Rowing's sanity...
5/15/2017 c8 Rune Tobor
Harry or Hermione are the usual one to benefit from manipulations of time.
This is new because Lily is the heroine.
Harry or Hermione are the usual one to benefit from manipulations of time.
This is new because Lily is the heroine.
5/15/2017 c1 Rune Tobor
Jo Rowling is blonde?
Well that explains why her books have plot holes.
And a distinct lack of forethought.
Jo Rowling is blonde?
Well that explains why her books have plot holes.
And a distinct lack of forethought.
2/9/2017 c8 Rune Tobor
A much better redo.
On par with ROUNDABOUT DESTINY.
A much better redo.
On par with ROUNDABOUT DESTINY.
7/24/2014 c8 SeverlyLate
Liked the story. Thank you for sharing.
One of the rare variety when the hero doesnt obsess about preserving the time line but does thats necessary, whereby not showing urges to tell everybody who listens about what he is doing.
Shame you dont write any more. This one was more like an outline.
Liked the story. Thank you for sharing.
One of the rare variety when the hero doesnt obsess about preserving the time line but does thats necessary, whereby not showing urges to tell everybody who listens about what he is doing.
Shame you dont write any more. This one was more like an outline.
7/1/2014 c7 sanbeegoldiewhitey
Very sound idea to thin out the Death Eater ranks. Canon Dumbledore never did.
Very sound idea to thin out the Death Eater ranks. Canon Dumbledore never did.
7/1/2014 c6 sanbeegoldiewhitey
Very good plot twist on Lily being a parselmouth. I like it better that Harry inherited it from Lily than having received it unintentionally from Voldy.
Very good plot twist on Lily being a parselmouth. I like it better that Harry inherited it from Lily than having received it unintentionally from Voldy.
7/1/2014 c5 sanbeegoldiewhitey
I was very satisfied with what Lily did to Lockhart. He was another mistake of Dumbledore. Surely he remembered how bad the fraud was at DADA.
I was very satisfied with what Lily did to Lockhart. He was another mistake of Dumbledore. Surely he remembered how bad the fraud was at DADA.
7/1/2014 c4 sanbeegoldiewhitey
It is good that Percy, Ron and Ginny will not be born. However, I feel bad that the twins will not be born either. Gred and Forge were always loyal to Harry.
It is good that Percy, Ron and Ginny will not be born. However, I feel bad that the twins will not be born either. Gred and Forge were always loyal to Harry.
7/1/2014 c3 sanbeegoldiewhitey
I share your opinion of Snape. Even in Book VII, JKR failed to make me like him. Albus Severus Potter should have been named Hedwig Dobby Potter in honor of Harry's first friend and the little friend who saved his life at Malfoy Manor and died doing so.
I share your opinion of Snape. Even in Book VII, JKR failed to make me like him. Albus Severus Potter should have been named Hedwig Dobby Potter in honor of Harry's first friend and the little friend who saved his life at Malfoy Manor and died doing so.
7/1/2014 c2 sanbeegoldiewhitey
Your Lily is amazing. She is my favorite character after Harry even though her appearance was only through pensive memories of Severus and the priori incantatem of Harry's wand and of course the mirror of Erised. Too bad Peter did not die. I hated him more than Voldemort.
Your Lily is amazing. She is my favorite character after Harry even though her appearance was only through pensive memories of Severus and the priori incantatem of Harry's wand and of course the mirror of Erised. Too bad Peter did not die. I hated him more than Voldemort.