9/18/2012 c5 3alix33
"Lily snuck up behind a seventh year Hufflepuff student. Not that it was hard; Gilderoy Lockhart was trying too hard to look good to notice her. She quietly cast her spell and left. The next time that he tried to obliterate a human the spell would be cast upon himself. It would continue casting until he was magically exhausted." - Yay!
"Lily found herself living in the smallest bedroom at #4 Privet Drive." - Portentous, that.
"She also found that every time she wondered by the cupboard under the stairs she wanted to hex someone." - No wonder.
"it still seemed strange to be living here full time." - "full-time" gets hyphenated.
"It took some time but Lily talked her parents into signing some forms. She had procured the forms to allow her to be her own Magical Guardian. If her parents died the forms would also emancipate her. Now that she was 15 she could make some decisions in the magical world. She didn't trust Dumbledore and wanted him to have no say over her life." - Good plan!
"That night she cast wards on her room, Petunia would never again go inside." - Another good plan!
"Lily snuck up behind a seventh year Hufflepuff student. Not that it was hard; Gilderoy Lockhart was trying too hard to look good to notice her. She quietly cast her spell and left. The next time that he tried to obliterate a human the spell would be cast upon himself. It would continue casting until he was magically exhausted." - Yay!
"Lily found herself living in the smallest bedroom at #4 Privet Drive." - Portentous, that.
"She also found that every time she wondered by the cupboard under the stairs she wanted to hex someone." - No wonder.
"it still seemed strange to be living here full time." - "full-time" gets hyphenated.
"It took some time but Lily talked her parents into signing some forms. She had procured the forms to allow her to be her own Magical Guardian. If her parents died the forms would also emancipate her. Now that she was 15 she could make some decisions in the magical world. She didn't trust Dumbledore and wanted him to have no say over her life." - Good plan!
"That night she cast wards on her room, Petunia would never again go inside." - Another good plan!