
8/25/2012 c2 InfinitelyPotter
Update, Update! SOON! So good! Is there a way you can make your chapters longer? Only if you have time to do so.
Update, Update! SOON! So good! Is there a way you can make your chapters longer? Only if you have time to do so.
8/25/2012 c2
46Pink Mockingjay in Hufflepuff
This is so sweet. :)
Does Dudley ever run into Harry or does he get up the nerve to contact him?
And about the date thing, I think you should probably just do a summary, but it's your story. You do what you want. :)

This is so sweet. :)
Does Dudley ever run into Harry or does he get up the nerve to contact him?
And about the date thing, I think you should probably just do a summary, but it's your story. You do what you want. :)
8/22/2012 c1
17RemmyBlack
I like this story, through the girl does seem a little mary-sue but it is in Dudley's P.O.V. If you want, I can give you a link to this quiz that will help determine if you are making your recycled character a mary-sue or not.
I do hope you continue this :)

I like this story, through the girl does seem a little mary-sue but it is in Dudley's P.O.V. If you want, I can give you a link to this quiz that will help determine if you are making your recycled character a mary-sue or not.
I do hope you continue this :)
8/22/2012 c1 Kina Hansen
This was really good; really well written! It is unique as well, and I really appreciate that! Please update soon :)
This was really good; really well written! It is unique as well, and I really appreciate that! Please update soon :)