
11/14/2013 c4
5Arinlianette
Marley's ability is pretty amazing. Can't wait to read how she fairs against Ward next chapter!

Marley's ability is pretty amazing. Can't wait to read how she fairs against Ward next chapter!
11/14/2013 c3 Arinlianette
Awkward...I'm glad you didn't make everyone just automatically be friends with Marley which makes this more realistic. Keep writing like this!
Awkward...I'm glad you didn't make everyone just automatically be friends with Marley which makes this more realistic. Keep writing like this!
11/14/2013 c2 Arinlianette
Action seen was very vivid and I feel like I'm watching the TV show! Can't wait to read more!
Action seen was very vivid and I feel like I'm watching the TV show! Can't wait to read more!
11/14/2013 c1 Arinlianette
Your writing style is great! I think this is the first Agents of S.H.I.E.L.D fanfic I've that has serious writing like this and an OC with noticeable character flaws. This is great :)
Your writing style is great! I think this is the first Agents of S.H.I.E.L.D fanfic I've that has serious writing like this and an OC with noticeable character flaws. This is great :)
11/14/2013 c4
6that'sthe411
This story is off to a great start. I really like the character of Marley, but with the way things are going it looks like it's shaping up to be a WardxMarley story, right? Please, I implore you, do NOT go down that road. CanonxOC stories are tricky business, and definitely should not be attempted in a fandom this young. It's a bad idea. Skyeward, FitzSimmons, friend!MarleyxWard and maybe MarleyxOC are much safer bets. Besides that, great job! Update soon!

This story is off to a great start. I really like the character of Marley, but with the way things are going it looks like it's shaping up to be a WardxMarley story, right? Please, I implore you, do NOT go down that road. CanonxOC stories are tricky business, and definitely should not be attempted in a fandom this young. It's a bad idea. Skyeward, FitzSimmons, friend!MarleyxWard and maybe MarleyxOC are much safer bets. Besides that, great job! Update soon!
11/11/2013 c4 foreverfinal
OMG I love it! YOU NEED TO UPDATE! QUICKLY! SERIOUSLY, STOP READING THIS AND UPDATE! I'M DYING OVER HERE!
OMG I love it! YOU NEED TO UPDATE! QUICKLY! SERIOUSLY, STOP READING THIS AND UPDATE! I'M DYING OVER HERE!
11/13/2012 c2
6azure blue espeon
Hmm, interesting story. I wasnt quite sure where you were going to go with this, but it seems to be pretty good for now.

Hmm, interesting story. I wasnt quite sure where you were going to go with this, but it seems to be pretty good for now.
10/3/2012 c2
1SakuraPheonix13
OMG! Please, PLEASE update! I'm hooked and I want SHIELD to SUFFER! Darn you Fury! I hope you burn for what you did to her! WRITE MORE!

OMG! Please, PLEASE update! I'm hooked and I want SHIELD to SUFFER! Darn you Fury! I hope you burn for what you did to her! WRITE MORE!
8/26/2012 c2 StacyB
Love it. From what I've read it looks like it will be very good and I hope you continue with it
Love it. From what I've read it looks like it will be very good and I hope you continue with it
8/26/2012 c2
1WolfDarkfur
So, she hasn't slept in 3 years and can feel peoples emotions, cool! Like this chapter.

So, she hasn't slept in 3 years and can feel peoples emotions, cool! Like this chapter.
8/25/2012 c2
4BewareTheBandersnatch
Hmm...was it SHIELD that rescued her? And what is her power? I am intrigued by this story.

Hmm...was it SHIELD that rescued her? And what is her power? I am intrigued by this story.