for The Almost Perfect Life10/2/2021 c11 Guest
I didn't like master windu attatude at all. Or the part where the council wanted break up a family
I didn't like master windu attatude at all. Or the part where the council wanted break up a family
2/18/2019 c5 Olly
You made Sola both childish and a complete bitch. You don't insult and hit your sister like that even if she was wrong to hide so many things, especially when said sister is pregnant.
You made Sola both childish and a complete bitch. You don't insult and hit your sister like that even if she was wrong to hide so many things, especially when said sister is pregnant.
8/22/2017 c9 Moonlight
I like Mace but he can be a little...(whispers)uptight and cold.
I like Mace but he can be a little...(whispers)uptight and cold.
8/22/2017 c1 Moonlight
This is so optimistic. Not in a bad way, just not in a realistic way.
This is so optimistic. Not in a bad way, just not in a realistic way.
10/28/2016 c13 Guest
Luke was three minutes older than Leia.
Luke was three minutes older than Leia.
10/28/2016 c4 Guest
Sola was going to yell at Padme for kissing a Jedi.
Sola was going to yell at Padme for kissing a Jedi.
10/28/2016 c2 Guest
Anakin started tickling Padme as she giggled with a soft look in her eyes. Her long silky hair hung around her shoulders.
Anakin started tickling Padme as she giggled with a soft look in her eyes. Her long silky hair hung around her shoulders.
10/28/2016 c1 Guest
Anakin looked at me as I cried. I said to him "you could have died". He said "I know that sweetie".
Anakin looked at me as I cried. I said to him "you could have died". He said "I know that sweetie".
9/30/2016 c13 Guest
Luke was born at two forty six and weighed four pounds and three minutes later his sister Leia was born.
Luke was born at two forty six and weighed four pounds and three minutes later his sister Leia was born.
9/22/2016 c13 Guest
Luke was born at 6:46 A.M. and Leia was born three minutes later.
Luke was born at 6:46 A.M. and Leia was born three minutes later.
11/20/2015 c1 Guest
Yea that would have! Made a lot of difference
Yea that would have! Made a lot of difference
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