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10/2/2021 c11 Guest
I didn't like master windu attatude at all. Or the part where the council wanted break up a family
7/23/2020 c1 RandomCoolGuy
damn there was a 2 year difference between comments there lol
7/23/2020 c8 RandomCoolGuy
that was a confusing pov change
2/18/2019 c5 Olly
You made Sola both childish and a complete bitch. You don't insult and hit your sister like that even if she was wrong to hide so many things, especially when said sister is pregnant.
8/22/2017 c9 Moonlight
I like Mace but he can be a little...(whispers)uptight and cold.
8/22/2017 c1 Moonlight
This is so optimistic. Not in a bad way, just not in a realistic way.
10/28/2016 c13 Guest
Luke was three minutes older than Leia.
10/28/2016 c4 Guest
Sola was going to yell at Padme for kissing a Jedi.
10/28/2016 c2 Guest
Anakin started tickling Padme as she giggled with a soft look in her eyes. Her long silky hair hung around her shoulders.
10/28/2016 c1 Guest
Anakin looked at me as I cried. I said to him "you could have died". He said "I know that sweetie".
9/30/2016 c13 Guest
Luke was born at two forty six and weighed four pounds and three minutes later his sister Leia was born.
9/22/2016 c13 Guest
Luke was born at 6:46 A.M. and Leia was born three minutes later.
11/20/2015 c1 Guest
Yea that would have! Made a lot of difference
10/13/2015 c21 4Radical Whales
Beautiful story loved it! :)
9/30/2015 c21 10megryan2189
I loved this story. I can't wait for your sequel and the other story!
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