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8/29/2012 c1 14Yuri no Kimi
It's a nice story- sad obviously, but nice. I don't know why the previous post said it's horrible. The story was good

There were a few errors here and there, but the plot line was interesting. I can't believe Hermione was so mean! Poor Draco...
Aww she must've felt so bad when she found out he died...

Anyway, good job! I hope you'll write more stories...
8/29/2012 c1 badly written
This story is OOC and isn't anything like a dracohermione or even a harry potter fanfic. learn to write please.
8/27/2012 c1 Joann P
I normally don't read these very sad unrequited love story because they are just that...SAD! But I love how you had written this. You started off with the news of his death and then transition to small snippets of their past and then to the present. It has a good flow going. Of course, I still cry no matter what because it is not a Dramione ending but it shouldn't be.

Thanks for writing!
8/26/2012 c1 4farawaylongago
the last part was really sad and beautiful great job
8/25/2012 c1 Belle
Amazing... Just so bloody amazing... Oh god... You just wouldnt know how much i cried while reading that...
8/25/2012 c1 3HaveyoumetTed
You know that 'lump-in-the-throat' feeling, I totally had it...usually, i don't like Romione in a Dramione fic, but this is just...awesome

Gr8 story, wizard hats off...i'm favoriting this one right away...
8/25/2012 c1 DuchessQueen
THAT IS SOOO SAD! I FUCKIN HATE HERMIONE!

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