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7Dinner
What an amazing chapter. The battle between oak and ash was so good. And Pikachu! Oh what could’ve been!
By the time we got to read Agatha’s farewell, I really connected with the thinking of their past together. I vividly felt a strong feeling of also remembering it, like I got shared in that memories too.
I was really moved when you had Ash call out how infernus had taught fear to a legend, and what that unleashed for him! I hope we get to see Ash and Infernus connect on that level more now.
Dazed really got to show off! Her, “I foresaw this moment”. If this was an anime, that would be her best voice line ever. I had chills!
Also the way you got Sam as prof oak! I can so imagine what its like finally meeting your childhood friend again, and just going right back into that same style of behaving with eachother.
All in all a great chapter!
7DinnerWhat an amazing chapter. The battle between oak and ash was so good. And Pikachu! Oh what could’ve been!
By the time we got to read Agatha’s farewell, I really connected with the thinking of their past together. I vividly felt a strong feeling of also remembering it, like I got shared in that memories too.
I was really moved when you had Ash call out how infernus had taught fear to a legend, and what that unleashed for him! I hope we get to see Ash and Infernus connect on that level more now.
Dazed really got to show off! Her, “I foresaw this moment”. If this was an anime, that would be her best voice line ever. I had chills!
Also the way you got Sam as prof oak! I can so imagine what its like finally meeting your childhood friend again, and just going right back into that same style of behaving with eachother.
All in all a great chapter!
16h c80 3GenericBoi989
Firstly, the battle with Oak delivered on the build up we've had (both with his team's occassional appearances and all of the time travel shenanigans.) Kudos to you on that front.
I also really enjoyed the moments with Daisy and Gary, I love how you've written both when they had their own chapters accompanying Ash and seeing them get back onto speaking terms is quite nice.
Also, the little bit with Agatha really was a sweet send off. Given how many scenes we got with her, I wasnt expecting to be so touched and yet I still was.
This is also the first chapter to be released while I'm in Medical School. It's amazing how this story has accompanied me for so much of my life and I hope to see it accompany me for many more milestones.
See you next chapter. Can't wait for what you have in store.
3GenericBoi989Firstly, the battle with Oak delivered on the build up we've had (both with his team's occassional appearances and all of the time travel shenanigans.) Kudos to you on that front.
I also really enjoyed the moments with Daisy and Gary, I love how you've written both when they had their own chapters accompanying Ash and seeing them get back onto speaking terms is quite nice.
Also, the little bit with Agatha really was a sweet send off. Given how many scenes we got with her, I wasnt expecting to be so touched and yet I still was.
This is also the first chapter to be released while I'm in Medical School. It's amazing how this story has accompanied me for so much of my life and I hope to see it accompany me for many more milestones.
See you next chapter. Can't wait for what you have in store.
16h c80 3ObNixilis97
A great read as usual! I empathize with your sentiment that some things struggled to get written, but it doesnt show in an overt way. Id think myself fairly familiar with your writing style after 2 million words, and the quality is still there! Always hoping for more from Traveler!
3ObNixilis97A great read as usual! I empathize with your sentiment that some things struggled to get written, but it doesnt show in an overt way. Id think myself fairly familiar with your writing style after 2 million words, and the quality is still there! Always hoping for more from Traveler!
16h c80 5AlanthePaladin
This story, even at its saddest always puts a smile on my face, and reminds me why I love the Pokémon franchise, flaws and all. I'm excited for more, as always.
5AlanthePaladinThis story, even at its saddest always puts a smile on my face, and reminds me why I love the Pokémon franchise, flaws and all. I'm excited for more, as always.
16h c80 Leafy boi
This was a nice chapter, tying up a few things like agitha's passing, Oak and Ash battling and talking about the past, reuniting with the other 3 trainers of pallet, daisy and gary finally meeting, poor tauros though x3, the little emotions woven through all your writing is awesome, SO EXCITED FOR MORE!
This was a nice chapter, tying up a few things like agitha's passing, Oak and Ash battling and talking about the past, reuniting with the other 3 trainers of pallet, daisy and gary finally meeting, poor tauros though x3, the little emotions woven through all your writing is awesome, SO EXCITED FOR MORE!
17h c80 Vini666
The epic battles are amazing, but what makes the traveler special are the characters. And of course the best character in the chapter was Seeker pretending to have the same weight.
The epic battles are amazing, but what makes the traveler special are the characters. And of course the best character in the chapter was Seeker pretending to have the same weight.
17h c80 Zyxis Ouroboros ReArchtypist
This is what peak looks like. I swear every Traveler chapter feels like a holiday with how much joy these chapters bring me. Thank you so much Elf and I'm glad life has given you a bit of a break.
This is what peak looks like. I swear every Traveler chapter feels like a holiday with how much joy these chapters bring me. Thank you so much Elf and I'm glad life has given you a bit of a break.
17h c80 Mythiggy
Thanks for the chapter. The fight between Ash and Sam was great. True growth there. Agatha's letter was also neat. Very emotional.
Hope to see the Silver Conference soon.
Thanks for the chapter. The fight between Ash and Sam was great. True growth there. Agatha's letter was also neat. Very emotional.
Hope to see the Silver Conference soon.
18h c80 2DarkestLight234
Ayo! Happy to finally see the chapter out, looking forward to seeing new chapters- even if they're a bit shorter. This one was well written, really enjoyed the battle between Oak and Ash, I think it shows how far he's gone and definitely cements him as a Master (like he wasn't already lmao)
2DarkestLight234Ayo! Happy to finally see the chapter out, looking forward to seeing new chapters- even if they're a bit shorter. This one was well written, really enjoyed the battle between Oak and Ash, I think it shows how far he's gone and definitely cements him as a Master (like he wasn't already lmao)
18h c80 Angel Zabuza
It’s very rare that I find a story that every chapter brings me more excite each time! Keep up the good work!
It’s very rare that I find a story that every chapter brings me more excite each time! Keep up the good work!
18h c80 hudson3447
I really loved the downtime here between all of them. I especially liked the battle with Sam, it really shows how far our boy has come. Keep up the great work lad!
I really loved the downtime here between all of them. I especially liked the battle with Sam, it really shows how far our boy has come. Keep up the great work lad!
18h c80 BJJPanda
Tauros could sense her exact position through his...
-Forgot to finish this
By the end she was... Poorly
-Did you mean to use poorly
As if she still weighed only a few times
-Assume you meant kilograms or pounds
Gary mumbled at Gary
-I assume the second one is Jon
Every time I think this story can't surprise me with its depth it does, a beautiful ending (and start) to the Saga of Agatha. I think being a Phuntamp fits her, a lost child.
Tauros could sense her exact position through his...
-Forgot to finish this
By the end she was... Poorly
-Did you mean to use poorly
As if she still weighed only a few times
-Assume you meant kilograms or pounds
Gary mumbled at Gary
-I assume the second one is Jon
Every time I think this story can't surprise me with its depth it does, a beautiful ending (and start) to the Saga of Agatha. I think being a Phuntamp fits her, a lost child.
19h c80 sensoray
WHEW what a fantastic chapter update!
The reconnection with Sammy and the ensuing battle was AMAZING. Im glad Ash is relaxing a bit and accepting his whole self and embracing it. (reaching easily to make use of the concepts, becoming as natural as breathing, and embracing it)
loved all of the friend and family reconnections too.
SUPER EXCITED ABOUT THE UPCOMING CONFERENCE.
i cried during the Agatha parts and i loved her PS message.
thankyou for the large and wonderful chapter update. you are a blessing.
WHEW what a fantastic chapter update!
The reconnection with Sammy and the ensuing battle was AMAZING. Im glad Ash is relaxing a bit and accepting his whole self and embracing it. (reaching easily to make use of the concepts, becoming as natural as breathing, and embracing it)
loved all of the friend and family reconnections too.
SUPER EXCITED ABOUT THE UPCOMING CONFERENCE.
i cried during the Agatha parts and i loved her PS message.
thankyou for the large and wonderful chapter update. you are a blessing.