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Reading about Ash's time-travel adventure has me running through everything Agatha ever said to Ash. Including the comment about a ghost-type hole in Ash's team. How much had Agatha put together by the time she met the younger Ash? Oak would have been able to reunite with Ash when the time loop closed, but Agatha was another matter.
20alias093001Reading about Ash's time-travel adventure has me running through everything Agatha ever said to Ash. Including the comment about a ghost-type hole in Ash's team. How much had Agatha put together by the time she met the younger Ash? Oak would have been able to reunite with Ash when the time loop closed, but Agatha was another matter.
9/29 c79 ImGolden
I uninstalled fanfic, but for the past 2 months or so, I've been occasionally thinking about this book. Honestly, it's one of the most well written pieces of writing I've ever read
I uninstalled fanfic, but for the past 2 months or so, I've been occasionally thinking about this book. Honestly, it's one of the most well written pieces of writing I've ever read
9/27 c79 1Snoozing Lurker
After spending some time digesting this chapter, well... it is incredibly obvious that this chapter was worked towards for a long time. Hints to something like this being planned date all the way back (and there were many) and it was a joy to read how everything came together in the end.
Celebi being a gremling was also hilarious.
Not much else to add, other than that this chapter is definitely a highlight of Traveler so far.
1Snoozing LurkerAfter spending some time digesting this chapter, well... it is incredibly obvious that this chapter was worked towards for a long time. Hints to something like this being planned date all the way back (and there were many) and it was a joy to read how everything came together in the end.
Celebi being a gremling was also hilarious.
Not much else to add, other than that this chapter is definitely a highlight of Traveler so far.
9/27 c79 3OokamiMoon
Yes! I was confused with the time travel but now it all makes sense and I can't wait for the battle against champion oak!
3OokamiMoonYes! I was confused with the time travel but now it all makes sense and I can't wait for the battle against champion oak!
9/27 c31 1Mr-Luca-Wolf
I'm not sure if I should reread this story or continue. It's been two years or less since I read this story, and I've forgotten most of it.
1Mr-Luca-WolfI'm not sure if I should reread this story or continue. It's been two years or less since I read this story, and I've forgotten most of it.
9/24 c7 Ranma Youko
"(...)
speak to Professor Oak and see about that zubat that had been taken from the dead Rocket grunt's belt.(...)"
Ah. There he is!
"(...)
speak to Professor Oak and see about that zubat that had been taken from the dead Rocket grunt's belt.(...)"
Ah. There he is!
9/23 c79 1Uber Ghidorah
The one thing I was hoping for was to catch a Pokemon from the past, mainly a Kleavor since Ash doesn't have a Bug type yet. I'm just hoping Ash will catch a Bug type in the future.
Other than that, I did enjoy this chapter. Maybe if/when Ash goes to Sinnoh for a while, maybe there'll be a number of time and space-related incidents there, considering the space-time distortions. Who's to say it couldn't happen the other way around?
1Uber GhidorahThe one thing I was hoping for was to catch a Pokemon from the past, mainly a Kleavor since Ash doesn't have a Bug type yet. I'm just hoping Ash will catch a Bug type in the future.
Other than that, I did enjoy this chapter. Maybe if/when Ash goes to Sinnoh for a while, maybe there'll be a number of time and space-related incidents there, considering the space-time distortions. Who's to say it couldn't happen the other way around?
9/23 c4 Ranma Youko
"(...)
Ash looked forward to having a new member on his team, although he was nervous about having one that had been subjected to the Rockets' treatment. Still, he wasn't about to refuse it. At least he could give it a better home.(...)"
Question: what happened with the other Pokémon he got ? The one from the dead rocket on the SSAne?
"(...)
Ash looked forward to having a new member on his team, although he was nervous about having one that had been subjected to the Rockets' treatment. Still, he wasn't about to refuse it. At least he could give it a better home.(...)"
Question: what happened with the other Pokémon he got ? The one from the dead rocket on the SSAne?
9/21 c79 Cake Bird
Omgggg batttle between Oak and Ash is crazy! This was such a heartfelt chapter and I really loved how Ash got to interact with Agatha and Sammie. Good tears are flowing rn thanks so much for this update! I loved the Suicune scene and Plume finally reached aeroblast! so many developments this update made my day!
Omgggg batttle between Oak and Ash is crazy! This was such a heartfelt chapter and I really loved how Ash got to interact with Agatha and Sammie. Good tears are flowing rn thanks so much for this update! I loved the Suicune scene and Plume finally reached aeroblast! so many developments this update made my day!
9/21 c79 RhythmRiot
Really enjoyed this latest chapter, these updates are always looked forward to. The section on Bruiser struggling with tossing his opponents away got my brain flowing and sprouted two ideas, I don't know if you're looking for any so feel free to ignore if so. The first was a thought to combine type energy with his love of knitting and see if he can weave together energy to make a rope/lasso to grab people and pull them in a la Scorpion from Mortal Kombat. The other was even more off the wall and just a random wave of creating a pseudo Bungee Gum from Hunter X Hunter where the punches create a line/tether he can reel back in. Like I said feel free to ignore these if you want, just wanted to write them down, I look forward to the next arc!
Really enjoyed this latest chapter, these updates are always looked forward to. The section on Bruiser struggling with tossing his opponents away got my brain flowing and sprouted two ideas, I don't know if you're looking for any so feel free to ignore if so. The first was a thought to combine type energy with his love of knitting and see if he can weave together energy to make a rope/lasso to grab people and pull them in a la Scorpion from Mortal Kombat. The other was even more off the wall and just a random wave of creating a pseudo Bungee Gum from Hunter X Hunter where the punches create a line/tether he can reel back in. Like I said feel free to ignore these if you want, just wanted to write them down, I look forward to the next arc!