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11/10/2012 c1 Guest
yes! yes! yes! make another one!
9/27/2012 c1 Guest
You should write one with Cato! Please? For me?! :D
9/11/2012 c1 1ThErE-iS-nO-fOrK
I read this while listening to the song "Unintended" by Muse. Made it even more sad and beautiful.
8/28/2012 c1 5artist quest
Awwwwww! That is soo sad :,( Crying over here :) Amazing though, I think it is short thought, maybe you could make it longer by adding the cornucopia part! I think when you write one in Catos POV you should add more of the cornucopia and Thresh and what Cato feels when he feels Clove scream and how he feels when he sees her on the ground. I think that you should emphisive your great writing by doing that. But I found that the fact that you brought tears to my eyes with your great detail was the best thing of this story, that made this story good. No story, novel or fic isnt good unless it has feeling, the readers need to smell everything, feel everything, see everything and feel everything clearly. Now that is what makes a good book , story or fic and you did just that! Good job write more soon!
8/26/2012 c1 8boywithbreadlover
This was great! Good job!

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