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10/23/2019 c1 Guest
I want a sequel or a rewrite cause it interesting and I want more of this
3/17/2017 c12 3DarkMatter777
realChyeslattes thanks for the comments sir! I understand that you are entitled to your opinion. But this is FanFiction after all, and yeah, piccolo is capable to having that much knowledge thanks to Kami of course, and obviously Goku would want to fight Magus, he is always itching for battle. While I tried my best to keep their personalities intact we folks who write FanFiction like to put our own take on their too. I thought we were supposed to unleash our imaginations! Would you rather them hold hands and sing Campfire songs? Lol if my story bugs you that much then don't read it. Nobody is forcing you too!
3/15/2017 c4 14The Real Chys Lattes
It was also never explained why he had to Fight Goku? It was hinted at, then stated, but never explained, even when an explanation was seemingly given, it wasn't a full one. Goku wouldn't have a problem with meeting a new person, especially someone who required assistance. That's just... not in character at all for him. He'd be pumped about the fight with Lavos, not demanding to have Magus prove his worth. Sorry, it's just very much like reading a story using familiar character's names but different character's personalities attached.
3/15/2017 c2 The Real Chys Lattes
One fourth of the way through this chapter and I decided this was very ooc. There was absolutely no reason for Piccolo to know things about Magus and there was also absolutely no reason for the two of them to fight.
9/30/2016 c22 Argonaut986
Something odd is going on.
9/30/2016 c21 Argonaut986
What an epic battle.
9/29/2016 c20 Argonaut986
Well, that was unexpectedly suprizing.
9/28/2016 c19 Argonaut986
I got no guess.
9/28/2016 c18 Argonaut986
9/28/2016 c17 Argonaut986
For Magus, it's a cake walk.
9/28/2016 c16 Argonaut986
9/28/2016 c15 Argonaut986
Ok...and things go asunder.
9/28/2016 c14 Argonaut986
Seems a bit anticlimactic, to me, but I think it's a great story.
9/28/2016 c13 Argonaut986
You mean "epilogue".
9/28/2016 c12 Argonaut986
They're going to WIN!
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