for Cullens and Jacob read The Twilight Saga3/20/2013 c1 
41JerinAnn
Great so far, but I think you should use the proper way to write stories. What I mean is that I think you should start a new paragraph every time someone else talks. It was hard to read. Love the idea so far.
41JerinAnnGreat so far, but I think you should use the proper way to write stories. What I mean is that I think you should start a new paragraph every time someone else talks. It was hard to read. Love the idea so far.
9/5/2012 c1 Crystal
Great start.
Update soon!
Great start.
Update soon!
8/27/2012 c1 Emma
KEEEP GOING U RULLEEE!
KEEEP GOING U RULLEEE!
8/28/2012 c1 3curiosity-striks-the-mind
ohhhhh do more! do more! ghese i sound like a two year old wanting candy!
3curiosity-striks-the-mindohhhhh do more! do more! ghese i sound like a two year old wanting candy!