
5/13/2018 c4 Wilderchain
Hey! you said we can make requests, well i have one ! you should make a sauron x female/oc story! theirs not enough, im really looking forward to see how the rest of your story unravels
Hey! you said we can make requests, well i have one ! you should make a sauron x female/oc story! theirs not enough, im really looking forward to see how the rest of your story unravels
3/13/2016 c2
9FateMagician
I can't believe I am just now noticing this update... I blame Gmail.
There are so few stories that are Witch-King/OC, so I can't wait until the official chapter update!

I can't believe I am just now noticing this update... I blame Gmail.
There are so few stories that are Witch-King/OC, so I can't wait until the official chapter update!
7/25/2015 c1 Cosmos-Maiden
Hmmm... are you still continuing this story? I dearly hope so. It was written in 2013 apparently, so that wasn't too long ago.
Anyway, here's my critique for this story: I honestly love your writing style. You go into great detail which is something I, unlike most other readers, adore. Lots of details give me a good picture of things in my mind. The way the words flow together neatly is also something else that I like. And I don't see any spelling errors, so I say you did an excellent job on that. I can't stand bad grammar so I truly admire an author who can avoid misspellings. If there were any misspellings I clearly missed them.
To honest, I was kinda hoping your character Elrilmalia and the Witch-King would meet in the first chapter, but oh well. That just leaves me wanting more and longing to know what happens next. I really love suspense and mystery! So please don't torture me, or other readers, by abandoning this story. I think it's rather well written.
And besides all that, all I can say is that this story has certainly piqued my interest. I hope you haven't given up on this story and will update soon. I'm eager to see what happens in the next chapter. Though I'm not going to fav and follow this story just yet. If this gets updated again I promise to do so, but I don't see a point in adding this to my favorites if it's discontinued.
Anyway, I think you've done a fantastic job. Keep up the good work!
And so I wish you luck on creating a successful story! :)
Hmmm... are you still continuing this story? I dearly hope so. It was written in 2013 apparently, so that wasn't too long ago.
Anyway, here's my critique for this story: I honestly love your writing style. You go into great detail which is something I, unlike most other readers, adore. Lots of details give me a good picture of things in my mind. The way the words flow together neatly is also something else that I like. And I don't see any spelling errors, so I say you did an excellent job on that. I can't stand bad grammar so I truly admire an author who can avoid misspellings. If there were any misspellings I clearly missed them.
To honest, I was kinda hoping your character Elrilmalia and the Witch-King would meet in the first chapter, but oh well. That just leaves me wanting more and longing to know what happens next. I really love suspense and mystery! So please don't torture me, or other readers, by abandoning this story. I think it's rather well written.
And besides all that, all I can say is that this story has certainly piqued my interest. I hope you haven't given up on this story and will update soon. I'm eager to see what happens in the next chapter. Though I'm not going to fav and follow this story just yet. If this gets updated again I promise to do so, but I don't see a point in adding this to my favorites if it's discontinued.
Anyway, I think you've done a fantastic job. Keep up the good work!
And so I wish you luck on creating a successful story! :)
9/12/2013 c2
11Le Pleiade
I think this would be a really good story. I hope you continue this story soon!

I think this would be a really good story. I hope you continue this story soon!
6/3/2013 c2 Goddess of magic
I loved it! I've never read LOTR story with that kind of plot. I hope you'll update soon!
I loved it! I've never read LOTR story with that kind of plot. I hope you'll update soon!
1/24/2013 c2
14LuluCalliope
Well, while I wait for this story to get updated, I'll add this to my list of favorites and check out your other stories. I hope you update soon!

Well, while I wait for this story to get updated, I'll add this to my list of favorites and check out your other stories. I hope you update soon!
1/24/2013 c1 LuluCalliope
I am loving this story so far! This is amazing! And yes, I'm glad that someone decided to write a story that took place before the battle!
I am loving this story so far! This is amazing! And yes, I'm glad that someone decided to write a story that took place before the battle!
1/23/2013 c2 i am nobody you know
I'm glad you'll be working on your stories :) hopefully this one will be updated very soon? XD Anyways, thanks for the notice!
I'm glad you'll be working on your stories :) hopefully this one will be updated very soon? XD Anyways, thanks for the notice!