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2/22/2019 c1 L.E.T.I.-77
No crei que natsu fuera un buen negociador XD
9/11/2016 c1 Miesai
It was really sweet how amazing you could write Lucys emotions espacelly couse your'e an boy and I'm a girl, but anyways great Job there :D
9/2/2016 c1 Cosy Cody
I'm a female and I'm pretty sure you got Lucy's thoughts pretty accurate. I think that Lucy's embarrassment was definitely something that would happen if this event ever did become canon. However, what I don't know is whether you got the feelings of love correct, as I've never been in love before (except with Killua from HunterxHunter, love that little white haired cute ass little assassin! ~). Although, I do feel like that's accurate as well, as it was believable that this would happen. Overall a limey masterpiece! 10/10! A! Woooo! - Female Cody
6/9/2016 c1 Sheilabff
This is by far the best one ever and it had so much detail that it was amazing good work
5/18/2016 c1 Fehriechan01
OMG ! I already read the original of this before and thank god you made LUCY POV ! Aahhh !
Still not done reading this but i really wanted to give you my review now XD hihi..

AND THIS IS AMAZING !
4/19/2016 c1 Kenndrick
Before you wonder, yes despite my online name I am a female. Yea the train of thought was accurate. I liked the story, especially the part where Natsu freaking purred. But now I'm gonna have a hard time finishing up watching Fairy Tail with this stuff stuck in my head.
3/1/2015 c1 4BatheMeInSprinkles
To the writer by the name of "Lanky Nathan"...
The lemon was soooooo not needed. I really liked reading this, because not only was it grammatically correct, but it was filled to the brim with emotions that I can see Lucy and Natsu feeling. It was great to read, especially when I could *feel* the characters do that. It ended, I wish it hadn't. But all good things come to an end, and this story is no different, right? :) LOOOOVED THIS!
10/29/2013 c1 Sharkarella
I think you really portrayed Lucy's feelings well. If you hadn't mentioned it I wouldn't have noticed you're a male.
8/7/2013 c1 Unknown
Yay! NaLu _
2/19/2013 c1 4A Fan1204
So i've been meaning to read this for awhile now but i've been procrastinating like usual lol. Pretty well written my friend and i thought you did a decent job of describing Lucy's perspective. Though i'm going to say this right now, im more of a Natsu Lisanna fan than a natsu lucy. Its a close second so i still enjoyed it. I think the lime was pretty good and i bet you could write a lemon if you tried. I know its not your thing but who knows, sometimes lemons can actually drive a plot in certain directions. Certainly not something to not consider for your other story. Keep up the good work man!
12/26/2012 c1 Guest
you're a great girl man :) welldone xxx
11/12/2012 c1 Trunksmybaby
Whether it was a lemon or a lime, I really enjoyed it
11/10/2012 c1 the-true-Freya
No worries, you did great. This fic complimented LittleMissAfflicted's greatly and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it :)
11/10/2012 c1 115Uchiha Evangeline
That was really good, really! Lucy's emotions were portraited beutifully, and since I already loved this story for, what, months now, it was nice seeing her pov.

Just one thing! Not that it was bad or anything, but we girls don't really think cars mechanisms as we speak of our feelings XD The reverse-5th thing was quite nice, but I, as a female cars lover, wouldn't even imagine thinking of it - just a hint, since you actually asked.

Really nice job!
10/25/2012 c1 3HiiroKumo
I can't believe you're a guy! It was so heartfelt and I could feel myself in Lucy's shoes. It was adorable! Still can't believe a guy wrote this. Anyways, very well done. Do more NaLu, pretty please?
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