for There's Nothing to Fear2/10 c35 Auroras Jenkins
I like your story. It takes things slowly. Good that Draco found a new life for himself. Very sad that the potion didn't work, but as Severus said, there are other things that they can try, and the pull they feel thoward England may just have been the potions work.
I look forward to seeing more and discovering where the journey will take them.
On a different note, Chapter 33 contains a significant amount of content that overlaps with a previous chapter.
I like your story. It takes things slowly. Good that Draco found a new life for himself. Very sad that the potion didn't work, but as Severus said, there are other things that they can try, and the pull they feel thoward England may just have been the potions work.
I look forward to seeing more and discovering where the journey will take them.
On a different note, Chapter 33 contains a significant amount of content that overlaps with a previous chapter.
2/2 c33 Jentrophy
Very much enjoying the story! There’s some issues near the end of ch33 with repeted text though. Thanks for sharing your work
Very much enjoying the story! There’s some issues near the end of ch33 with repeted text though. Thanks for sharing your work
1/21 c1 iLoveMyMV
Yes! This is what I need! It's been a year since I've been busy with work Nd has not done a lot of reading fanfics.. and I love HP fanfics, specially Severus and Hermione. This is just what I need! Reading the first chapter made me imagine hogwarts again. I like how you write your story, it is so clear and not at all cringy, at least in this first chapter I read. The only thing that's really bugging me is your single quotation mark whenever there is a dialogue. I think you should use double quotation marks to mark every dialogue..that's all. I can't wait to read more, also I am so glad that I see that you just updated this this month, glad this is not an abandoned story!
Yes! This is what I need! It's been a year since I've been busy with work Nd has not done a lot of reading fanfics.. and I love HP fanfics, specially Severus and Hermione. This is just what I need! Reading the first chapter made me imagine hogwarts again. I like how you write your story, it is so clear and not at all cringy, at least in this first chapter I read. The only thing that's really bugging me is your single quotation mark whenever there is a dialogue. I think you should use double quotation marks to mark every dialogue..that's all. I can't wait to read more, also I am so glad that I see that you just updated this this month, glad this is not an abandoned story!
3/2/2022 c32 jsfanfix
I’m in love with this story! I hope you update soon! I was sad to realize that I had reached the end! With a cliffhanger too! Why is Draco in New York!
I’m in love with this story! I hope you update soon! I was sad to realize that I had reached the end! With a cliffhanger too! Why is Draco in New York!
2/21/2022 c1 katholmes130
Hermione started a year later than her classmates so she was 12, plus she added a year to her age with the time turner. Also, it took a year for Hogwarts to be rebuilt so 21 is actually what her age was when she returned.
Hermione started a year later than her classmates so she was 12, plus she added a year to her age with the time turner. Also, it took a year for Hogwarts to be rebuilt so 21 is actually what her age was when she returned.
11/16/2020 c1 mandorakat
why would you ever force a bogart on people just after a war? that horrible.
why would you ever force a bogart on people just after a war? that horrible.