for One Piece: A New Start10/29/2012 c12 
12Taiski
Hey its me Tai, I have a acount now. The story is going great man. I like to thank you for choosing the allias I posted. Keep up the great work man.
12TaiskiHey its me Tai, I have a acount now. The story is going great man. I like to thank you for choosing the allias I posted. Keep up the great work man.
10/27/2012 c12 1The procrastinator- MasQ
Yay! And I'm the only one who guessed? : Ok. Well, to be honest, I wasn't expecting to win. Uhhh, perhaps Blizzeta from Legend of Zelda: Twiglight Princess. It was a really fun boss to play against, and Cortez's chakra abilities would definetly make it an interesting fight.
1The procrastinator- MasQYay! And I'm the only one who guessed? : Ok. Well, to be honest, I wasn't expecting to win. Uhhh, perhaps Blizzeta from Legend of Zelda: Twiglight Princess. It was a really fun boss to play against, and Cortez's chakra abilities would definetly make it an interesting fight.
10/27/2012 c12 4Firetrail
good work please continue I really like this story and thank you for making Cortez not a total psycho.
4Firetrailgood work please continue I really like this story and thank you for making Cortez not a total psycho.
10/20/2012 c10 Tai
I think that 'The Laughing Demon' Cortez sounds better. But, that's just me.
I think that 'The Laughing Demon' Cortez sounds better. But, that's just me.
10/8/2012 c3 Tai
Your OC is nice. not to overpowered, not to weak. And he would fit in with the crew well. Can't wait till he meets Chopper, Franky, Robin, and Brook.
Your OC is nice. not to overpowered, not to weak. And he would fit in with the crew well. Can't wait till he meets Chopper, Franky, Robin, and Brook.
10/3/2012 c10 2Tough chick
For some reason I've got the narwhal song stuck in my head after reading this.
2Tough chickFor some reason I've got the narwhal song stuck in my head after reading this.
9/25/2012 c9 1The procrastinator- MasQ
Hmmm... A guess huh... Well, he could be a leak or an OC, so if he's an OC he could be Cortez's relative, and if he is a leak... Oh geez, he kind of sounds like this one dude from Naruto, but I can't think of the name! Dang it!
1The procrastinator- MasQHmmm... A guess huh... Well, he could be a leak or an OC, so if he's an OC he could be Cortez's relative, and if he is a leak... Oh geez, he kind of sounds like this one dude from Naruto, but I can't think of the name! Dang it!
9/18/2012 c8 20kage kitsune 14
Update soon. I can't wait to see Cortez's interactions with Smoker. Smoker's awesome.
20kage kitsune 14Update soon. I can't wait to see Cortez's interactions with Smoker. Smoker's awesome.
9/15/2012 c7 Daisylovesu
HUH really those two. Well that a intersting combination, my guess that those two are marines or pirates. Update soon.
HUH really those two. Well that a intersting combination, my guess that those two are marines or pirates. Update soon.
9/15/2012 c7 1The procrastinator- MasQ
Wahhh... No questions about those two yet... My guess is that they would probably be marines. Anyway, good chapter update! Can't wait for the next one!
1The procrastinator- MasQWahhh... No questions about those two yet... My guess is that they would probably be marines. Anyway, good chapter update! Can't wait for the next one!
9/12/2012 c6 Ved17
Nicely written. I cannot wait to see what else you have in mind! Also, I was wondering, will Cortez change his outfit, or pull a 'Luffy' and wear outfits with different color schemes?
Nicely written. I cannot wait to see what else you have in mind! Also, I was wondering, will Cortez change his outfit, or pull a 'Luffy' and wear outfits with different color schemes?