
1/27/2015 c7 AngelesPG
Ok if you want to rewrite, but do not let unfinished story please let me know if you're going to go, thanks
Ok if you want to rewrite, but do not let unfinished story please let me know if you're going to go, thanks
1/27/2015 c7 coolmon16
Hey don't delete them I think this is pretty good, punctuation regardless, so even if your choose to stop writing it out, at least leave it up.
Hey don't delete them I think this is pretty good, punctuation regardless, so even if your choose to stop writing it out, at least leave it up.
1/27/2015 c7 Guest
Update soon please and awesome story
Update soon please and awesome story
7/4/2014 c1 Random
Your spelling is poor, but it can be easily improved. :)
Your spelling is poor, but it can be easily improved. :)
6/21/2013 c2 theiya
your spelling is atrocious but try harder and you will make a awesome masterpiece
your spelling is atrocious but try harder and you will make a awesome masterpiece
6/5/2013 c6 AngelesPG
I like me the chapter to the end natsume return to konoha jaja makes me happy I hope that you continue updating thank you:)
I like me the chapter to the end natsume return to konoha jaja makes me happy I hope that you continue updating thank you:)
3/30/2013 c5 lupe
i love it i cant wait for the next one
i love it i cant wait for the next one
3/19/2013 c1 AngelesPG
espero q actualices pronto en verdad quiero ver como sakura convence a sasuke y q va pasar cuando se entere q ellla a estado siempre a su lado..
espero q actualices pronto en verdad quiero ver como sakura convence a sasuke y q va pasar cuando se entere q ellla a estado siempre a su lado..
2/19/2013 c5 rubyo
Hey I just started reading this story ans I love it!
I know u're busy but i hope u can update soon plz do!
thnx
Hey I just started reading this story ans I love it!
I know u're busy but i hope u can update soon plz do!
thnx
2/19/2013 c5 AngelesPG
I wait q you continue publishing your history it seems to me to be exciting ... this way q wait q update soon and do not leave this fanfic .. good to waiting
I wait q you continue publishing your history it seems to me to be exciting ... this way q wait q update soon and do not leave this fanfic .. good to waiting
2/18/2013 c5 Guest
this story is quite exiting, so im looking foreward till your going to update.
this story is quite exiting, so im looking foreward till your going to update.