9/6/2012 c1 2salmonandsoup
... Alright then...

I'm glad the Jockey finally found peace, but I recommend rewriting this. This story has quite a bit of potential, but your grammar, spelling, and pacing need work. A bit more description would be nice, as well.

Please don't take this as a flame, but I really do recommend rewriting this. Maybe a beta would help, my beta, XionAmmy, makes my fics, like, twenty times better than what they would be without her.

9/4/2012 c1 12BritishWaffleSyrup
Awesome! Good job.

9/3/2012 c1 54Tailsdoll123
Awesome, best way to get free of the apocalypse!

-Tailsdoll123