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for if i were to tell the truth

1/20/2014 c1 58sleepy queens
the "maybe he loves her maybe he doesn't.." line was so so perfect! Beautifully constructed!
8/22/2013 c1 66nina.eden
I love Draco.
I love Luna.
And the two of them together is just angsty perfection.
Their characterizations - Draco's bitter but still arrogant self loathing, and Luna's odd facade combined with a deep, celestial understanding - are spot on.
I did once hope for a Harry/Luna ending but looking back on it now, I really do prefer a very angst filled Draco/Luna relationship. It's very deep and emotional and I think the oddity of it all is just so very intriguing.
11/13/2012 c1 RatherAnonomous
this is really good for a first time. Especially at three in the morning. Well done I like it.
9/21/2012 c1 397Fire The Canon
This was really sweet. I really enjoyed the flow it had. There was something elegant about it and had me drawn in.

The only thing I have to say is - call me a capital letter nazi... but I kind of am. At the start of sentences, paragraphs... I don't know, it just really annoys me. I only really noticed it towards the end.

Well done, though.
9/7/2012 c1 3in cages
well, i certainly approve of this.
i can definitely see draco becoming obsessed (or, unless this is supposed to be love?) with something whilst he's trapped in his own manor.
i really really like the bit in between — explaining the plants & the scent, i think? — they put a real nice touch to it with a bit of edginess too.
and wow, that bit about stockholm syndrome being a bitchly little mistress — wonderful. i agree profusely! if this ever happened, i would hope that draco would at least feel SOME sympathy for luna. ah. i loved it. THANK YOU FOR THIS LOVELY READ! (and wow, sorry for this lame, long review).
9/5/2012 c1 4beccyorange
This is brilliant.
9/4/2012 c1 144dragonflybeach
Wow. Just wow. This was absolutely amazing.
9/3/2012 c1 FizzSummers
That was really beautiful.
9/3/2012 c1 642Abigail Belle
*Squeal* I did love it! I thought it was beautiful and I loved the angel symbolism (angels always fit Luna very well, don't they?)
My favourite line was "Angels don't fall for demons unless they're fallen angels" - that's so perfect for Draco's thought process in Deathly Hallows…
Thank you so much :D What a great thing to wake up to…!
9/3/2012 c1 24sangkar
how do you write so well it's not fair okay. ;_; stop killing my self-esteem with your brilliant stories. it's not nice.

haha jkjk /shot

um anyway. i found this to be sort of flawless. no, actually, it is flawless. and very nice. and asdfghjkl; why can i not write like you. ;_;

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