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2/16/2015 c1 Blue-eyes Lily
Well, that hurt! Absolutely beautiful! I've always thought that the line "I'm sorry, but we do not," was interesting, because the quesiton of whether or not Charles and Erik's goals are, in fact, such polar opposites as they portrayed as being does arise, and I loved your little exploration of that line.
You captured Erik's feelings so wonderfully, and the idea that the only thing Erik ever regretted was leaving Charles was just heart-breaking. Also, the second person worked really well, like Erik was writing an imaginary letter or fantasising about a conversation that would never take place.
Really awesome work!
Love,
Blue-eyes Thropp
6/6/2014 c1 74TheAngelofFate
Short, sweet and to the point! Nicely done!

"I do regret leaving you there on the beach.

And I will carry that regret to my grave."

Were my favorite lines!
9/1/2013 c1 Liana Legaspi
Short but good :)
9/3/2012 c1 Nobs
I like it! Thanks for posting. You should make a story out of it?

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