5/26/2016 c1 4Dame Selena
Oh right, Jack is silent so he didn't even say I do?! I'm thinking about the ending, so Rick is the alcoholic and not Karen? Or maybe Jack won Karen by his many gifts of wine (probably this one like in the game)
Oh right, Jack is silent so he didn't even say I do?! I'm thinking about the ending, so Rick is the alcoholic and not Karen? Or maybe Jack won Karen by his many gifts of wine (probably this one like in the game)
4/4/2013 c1 12NarwhaleNapper
Honestly, I don't know if I'm supposed to feel bad for Rick or happy for Karen, because everyone else seemed happy, and the mood you set in the beginning seemed pretty happy, too.
But it's not your fault; it's mine, mainly because I'm not familiar with this particular Harvest Moon title, so don't be surprised that i sound so confused in my review. That doesn't mean that your writing was bad. It was solid, and you did a nice job in creating the setting. I liked what I read, though I did wish you told us who Karen married. Great job on writing this!
Honestly, I don't know if I'm supposed to feel bad for Rick or happy for Karen, because everyone else seemed happy, and the mood you set in the beginning seemed pretty happy, too.
But it's not your fault; it's mine, mainly because I'm not familiar with this particular Harvest Moon title, so don't be surprised that i sound so confused in my review. That doesn't mean that your writing was bad. It was solid, and you did a nice job in creating the setting. I liked what I read, though I did wish you told us who Karen married. Great job on writing this!
3/5/2013 c1 7Songstress51
Well...never expected that! Lol I died when I read this XD It was pretty funny! Thanks for writing such a nice one-shot! :)
Well...never expected that! Lol I died when I read this XD It was pretty funny! Thanks for writing such a nice one-shot! :)
9/4/2012 c1 73Accidentally The Whole Fanfic
So if she wants a divorce, does she just drink him or smash the bottle, or both?
So if she wants a divorce, does she just drink him or smash the bottle, or both?