8/18/2014 c4 18the Red Omega
I was always wondering what happend to you, but it's grate to have you back.
I was always wondering what happend to you, but it's grate to have you back.
10/1/2012 c3 32Cloudsword774
Nice ending so far, a kid of reprise instead of a cliff hanger. You are really getting good at this. Gotta mosey!
Nice ending so far, a kid of reprise instead of a cliff hanger. You are really getting good at this. Gotta mosey!
9/17/2012 c2 6Mike101
You do write much like cloud does. I like this story. I'll be following it from now on.
You do write much like cloud does. I like this story. I'll be following it from now on.
9/14/2012 c2 32Cloudsword774
Uh oh. Now we got two sets of children lost. Though I think Mike would be able to figure it out quickly if he stopped panicking. LOL. Can't wait for more. Gotta Mosey!
Uh oh. Now we got two sets of children lost. Though I think Mike would be able to figure it out quickly if he stopped panicking. LOL. Can't wait for more. Gotta Mosey!
9/5/2012 c1 Cloudsword774
I don't know if I'm allowed to comment, but I'm really liking this story. The flow is great, the story is gripping and the way you portrayed my characters is perfect. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Gotta Mosey!
I don't know if I'm allowed to comment, but I'm really liking this story. The flow is great, the story is gripping and the way you portrayed my characters is perfect. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Gotta Mosey!