10/18/2016 c1 Ashley
Funny and cute, loved it!
Funny and cute, loved it!
9/18/2012 c1 1Michelle Weasley Fenton
You need to work on your spanish, if you are trying to mix languages please find a beta willing to fix the mistakes made by google translate. But thanks for trying and as a hispanic person, I'm proud to see my native language even if it needs work.
You need to work on your spanish, if you are trying to mix languages please find a beta willing to fix the mistakes made by google translate. But thanks for trying and as a hispanic person, I'm proud to see my native language even if it needs work.
9/14/2012 c1 50Aggie2011
Not bad :) a few things I'd nitpick about but I'm not gonna put that in a review. Overall, a pretty good read! I liked the tooth brush and the reason he kept it :)
Not bad :) a few things I'd nitpick about but I'm not gonna put that in a review. Overall, a pretty good read! I liked the tooth brush and the reason he kept it :)
9/13/2012 c1 1doismundos
SO glad I made you write this bunny! This is such a sweet little one-shot, good job luv:)
SO glad I made you write this bunny! This is such a sweet little one-shot, good job luv:)
9/5/2012 c1 6sweethearts together
Yes! Amazing! It's a really cool idea and I love that he keeps a green toothbrush just cause it reminds him of her. So sweet 3
Yes! Amazing! It's a really cool idea and I love that he keeps a green toothbrush just cause it reminds him of her. So sweet 3
9/5/2012 c1 ZS
So sweet.
So sweet.