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9/13/2017 c1 Guest
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5/20/2016 c2 Guest
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1/25/2016 c1 Leonard
Its good but you have to make a little bit longer I mean be on the page itself and then make story itself a little bit longer looking forward to read the rest of the story but I'm hoping you can expand on it but I don't do a little bit longer cuz he got only two pages at first you might want in the first place a little bit longer you don't know me alright thanks for your story have a good evening
8/13/2015 c2 28SparkzReborn
You should really continue doing this, I don't know why you stopped, anyway its your story you can do what you want. xD
5/20/2015 c1 19Smiling Seshat
Is this story dead?
12/11/2014 c2 3Ferm
so sweet :)
5/10/2014 c2 9Timberwolfe
A great start to the great potential of a story. You have already changed Sakura's name to Hikari and one can see an evil Danzo in the way of the greater good. You have separated the future from the past and I can only wait to read what you have planned next. Keep it up! Howl!
1/25/2014 c2 32Little Kunai
danzo if you dare to sniff around those kids not only will sakura knock you into next year but tsunade will add another five years to it. I guarantee it
1/25/2014 c1 Little Kunai
well that's quite a thing to say to your younger self and frankly...it's not something I'd wanna from my older self
10/6/2013 c2 Cloud Ex-SOLDIER
An interesting concept.

The names, I would shorten their names since they are much too long. I understand Naruto and Sakura wish to honor their parents and teachers but it is a bit ridiculous.

Knowing the future or at least a possible one definitely presents potential for the plot for Team 7.
9/10/2013 c2 Nanai
Please update your story it's really good to read and am I hoping that sakura could be reunited back to naruto :)
4/26/2013 c1 Fan Fan 92555
This sotry suck read mr grimjaws sotries for somthing gud!
1/18/2013 c2 9Chimebelle
wait, she just told the kids everything?
hm,,,, what role would hikari's kids play?
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