
11/26/2015 c1 Guest
well written :)
well written :)
6/10/2013 c1
32Sleepyreader13
This story made me laugh and want to cry and smile and want to punch things all in the same virtual chapter. This story deserves so many more reviews than it has. It's sad and sweet all at once and I think it's wonderful. I just figured you ought to know that.
There was just so much *emotion* in this. It was almost like all those feelings were coming off the screen and squeezing my heart. I loved the touch with Tony, him having to be so darn drunk to even think about talking about feelings. All of it was great, and I loved it.
So, thank you for posting this. It's beautiful. Never stop writing.
X Sleepy

This story made me laugh and want to cry and smile and want to punch things all in the same virtual chapter. This story deserves so many more reviews than it has. It's sad and sweet all at once and I think it's wonderful. I just figured you ought to know that.
There was just so much *emotion* in this. It was almost like all those feelings were coming off the screen and squeezing my heart. I loved the touch with Tony, him having to be so darn drunk to even think about talking about feelings. All of it was great, and I loved it.
So, thank you for posting this. It's beautiful. Never stop writing.
X Sleepy
5/16/2013 c1
5Boyfriend Tees and Honey Bees
Bruce's confession at the end makes me tear up a little. :')

Bruce's confession at the end makes me tear up a little. :')
1/24/2013 c1
4Cindy Svensson
Tne end note confused me. I thought they got back together? How is that not happy? Stayed there?
Great and wonderful story. It had this sense of realism that most fics don't have.
In a few places, you used a capital letter after a spoken sentence. Like "Which part?" She asks"

Tne end note confused me. I thought they got back together? How is that not happy? Stayed there?
Great and wonderful story. It had this sense of realism that most fics don't have.
In a few places, you used a capital letter after a spoken sentence. Like "Which part?" She asks"
1/17/2013 c1
6pbk
i'm a pretty rabid HBMS fan, and the truth is one of my favorite songs of theirs. great choice for this pairing, and i could even feel the flow of the song's lyrics with the progression of the fic. people who haven't heard the song are missing out on how brilliantly this was written.

i'm a pretty rabid HBMS fan, and the truth is one of my favorite songs of theirs. great choice for this pairing, and i could even feel the flow of the song's lyrics with the progression of the fic. people who haven't heard the song are missing out on how brilliantly this was written.
11/10/2012 c1
14Maladicta
Why do you have so few reviews? This is a great fic! I was practically gut wrenched in places!

Why do you have so few reviews? This is a great fic! I was practically gut wrenched in places!
9/23/2012 c1
6innocent-vessel
This was awesome. You have such a great hook on these characters. Stomach punch right to the feels.

This was awesome. You have such a great hook on these characters. Stomach punch right to the feels.
9/13/2012 c1 superlative
This is just so beautiful and realistic. I like how Darcy is portrayed here, and her relationship with Bruce, it's kind of heartbreaking at first, and not everything is perfect, but at the end things are good. Still not quite a perfectly ever after, but realistic, and I really like it.
Good work! :D
This is just so beautiful and realistic. I like how Darcy is portrayed here, and her relationship with Bruce, it's kind of heartbreaking at first, and not everything is perfect, but at the end things are good. Still not quite a perfectly ever after, but realistic, and I really like it.
Good work! :D
9/10/2012 c1 Beccatt
Sooo good!
Sooo good!
9/8/2012 c1
3DGfleetfox
What a wonderful thing, this was truly superb. It struck me as very realistic as far as how Bruce would deal with a relationship with all of his issues. And I very much enjoyed the TonyXDarcy bonding :) Good one.

What a wonderful thing, this was truly superb. It struck me as very realistic as far as how Bruce would deal with a relationship with all of his issues. And I very much enjoyed the TonyXDarcy bonding :) Good one.