for Harry & Gabrielle2/24/2013 c1 
4Covante
Sirius took a sip of wine muttering to himself, "The poor kid can't catch a break. He's in bed with a Veela and he's unconscious."
That line is just so perfectly fitting for Sirius.
4CovanteSirius took a sip of wine muttering to himself, "The poor kid can't catch a break. He's in bed with a Veela and he's unconscious."
That line is just so perfectly fitting for Sirius.
2/5/2013 c6 1lordamnesia
I'm pretty sure this was posted before, but I loved it then and haven't lost any love for it when I stumbled onto it again just today! Awesome story, thanks for the read!
1lordamnesiaI'm pretty sure this was posted before, but I loved it then and haven't lost any love for it when I stumbled onto it again just today! Awesome story, thanks for the read!
1/29/2013 c1 10SnuggleKitten69
I absolutely love Sirius' comment at the end of this chapter. I very much like everything so far except one point - the Hermione Granger of fourth year, regardless of condition, would never break his confidence to a professor - especially not if it cost Gryffindor house points.
I also felt McGonagall was out of character with such a harsh punishment for Harry. It is, however, your story, and I am enjoying it very much.
Thank you for sharing it with us.
10SnuggleKitten69I absolutely love Sirius' comment at the end of this chapter. I very much like everything so far except one point - the Hermione Granger of fourth year, regardless of condition, would never break his confidence to a professor - especially not if it cost Gryffindor house points.
I also felt McGonagall was out of character with such a harsh punishment for Harry. It is, however, your story, and I am enjoying it very much.
Thank you for sharing it with us.
1/21/2013 c6 noylj
This story deserves several more chapters.
Did I miss Harry losing a horcrux or was he never one?
This story deserves several more chapters.
Did I miss Harry losing a horcrux or was he never one?
12/30/2012 c6 2TheSandyToadfish
Ripper story. Only real mistake I think you made was mentioning Harry's date with Cho which hadn't yet happened. Otherwise ripper story.
-TST
2TheSandyToadfishRipper story. Only real mistake I think you made was mentioning Harry's date with Cho which hadn't yet happened. Otherwise ripper story.
-TST
12/25/2012 c6 17MSgt SilverDollar and Snake
Great short story. Voldie died by Harry's hand so all is well.
17MSgt SilverDollar and SnakeGreat short story. Voldie died by Harry's hand so all is well.
12/19/2012 c5 TxA-GunFighter
Really good chapter to a fine story. Really love happy, powerful, kick ass Harry stories. Canon is sooooooo boring.
gunny
Really good chapter to a fine story. Really love happy, powerful, kick ass Harry stories. Canon is sooooooo boring.
gunny
12/7/2012 c5 Beatrix Hart
I thought you did well, till you added Hermione into the mix.
This isn't a 'flame' or me bashing, I get the feeling your rather defensive about reviews/comments by your A/Ns... the 'fuck off' was a clear indicator.
I just have a suggestion.
A three-way is more... niche. I know it's popular in fan fiction but still, it's not the norm and a lot of people don't like it. I'm not saying you shouldn't write it - it's your story, write what you like.
Just, next time you should put a warning in the summary. I wouldn't have read the fic if I had known, I was keen to read a Gabrielle/Harry fic and thought that was what I was getting.
I thought you did well, till you added Hermione into the mix.
This isn't a 'flame' or me bashing, I get the feeling your rather defensive about reviews/comments by your A/Ns... the 'fuck off' was a clear indicator.
I just have a suggestion.
A three-way is more... niche. I know it's popular in fan fiction but still, it's not the norm and a lot of people don't like it. I'm not saying you shouldn't write it - it's your story, write what you like.
Just, next time you should put a warning in the summary. I wouldn't have read the fic if I had known, I was keen to read a Gabrielle/Harry fic and thought that was what I was getting.