for Harry & Gabrielle7/26/2021 c4 bobstur
Don't lie in the title and description,you haven't even put Hermione as a character in the description and then you off and make her the main interest , while Gabrielle , who might I add is in the fcking title is put to the side. If you want to go into the clickbait business please consider becoming a youtuber and don't pull this shit here.
Don't lie in the title and description,you haven't even put Hermione as a character in the description and then you off and make her the main interest , while Gabrielle , who might I add is in the fcking title is put to the side. If you want to go into the clickbait business please consider becoming a youtuber and don't pull this shit here.
5/27/2021 c6 
1Wynn Silver
This was the perfect ending. I love it and I love this story. Wonderful way to tie up the prophesy. As soon as the fight started I knew what was up and I had a huge smile.
1Wynn SilverThis was the perfect ending. I love it and I love this story. Wonderful way to tie up the prophesy. As soon as the fight started I knew what was up and I had a huge smile.
1/21/2021 c6 SilverRyu
HAHAHA HAHAHA HAHAHA
The laughter of for the every end, it was very funny. Love how with Harry using his hair in the wand was enough to probably work around the prophecy so Tronks gets the kill. Great story start to finish, will read again.
HAHAHA HAHAHA HAHAHA
The laughter of for the every end, it was very funny. Love how with Harry using his hair in the wand was enough to probably work around the prophecy so Tronks gets the kill. Great story start to finish, will read again.
12/20/2020 c5 15Saissa
Since I last reviewed this 5 years ago, I cannot comment on chap 6 again. But after re-reading this I have just now realized.
In Chapter 6 Tonks' killed Voldie with a wand that Harry made - so Voldie WAS killed by Harrys hand - thus the prophecy is fulfilled.
Great story as always.
15SaissaSince I last reviewed this 5 years ago, I cannot comment on chap 6 again. But after re-reading this I have just now realized.
In Chapter 6 Tonks' killed Voldie with a wand that Harry made - so Voldie WAS killed by Harrys hand - thus the prophecy is fulfilled.
Great story as always.
12/9/2020 c6 A German guest
I'll mark this story with an E. Having somebody other than Harry offing the bad guy is a refreshing idea. What detracts from an O, is the use of several run-of-the-mill details: your Dumbledore is a rather two-dimensional character, the shopping trips are rather cliche'd, and the triad idea could have used for much better effect if it needed to be used at all.
I'll mark this story with an E. Having somebody other than Harry offing the bad guy is a refreshing idea. What detracts from an O, is the use of several run-of-the-mill details: your Dumbledore is a rather two-dimensional character, the shopping trips are rather cliche'd, and the triad idea could have used for much better effect if it needed to be used at all.
6/13/2020 c3 15gentledove2
I really dislike Dumbledouche. Perhaps marrying him off to just Voldemort isn't enough. Oh...I know...a triad marriage with Dumbledouche, Umbitch, and Moldy-voldy. Now that would be a match made in hell!
15gentledove2I really dislike Dumbledouche. Perhaps marrying him off to just Voldemort isn't enough. Oh...I know...a triad marriage with Dumbledouche, Umbitch, and Moldy-voldy. Now that would be a match made in hell!
6/13/2020 c2 gentledove2
I am really enjoying this story. You have done a lovely job on it! I truly hope something nasty happens to Dumbledore at the end of the story. Oh, I know...marry Dumbledore to Voldemort...then they can torment each other in Azkaban...where BOTH of them belong!
I am really enjoying this story. You have done a lovely job on it! I truly hope something nasty happens to Dumbledore at the end of the story. Oh, I know...marry Dumbledore to Voldemort...then they can torment each other in Azkaban...where BOTH of them belong!
11/30/2019 c4 Legalt
Old story, but I honestly can't believe you could ruin your own story so fast. You NAME your story Harry and Gabrielle yet now add Hermione AND she's even the MAIN LOVE INTEREST!?
Four long chapters of an ambiguous relationship between Harry and Gabrielle which, mind you, you would think could have progressed into love after many months around and sleeping with each other, EVEN IF the bond in this story is more unusual... Which oh, I dunno, would've been NICE considering the title...
Like, are you kidding me? You're clearly not an idiot based on the fact you can write and have a good vocabulary and knowledge, so how is that even a good idea? I can't fathom it. I honestly wish I could get hours of my life back to prevent the crushing disappointment of something I was enjoying.
I don't ever like bashing authors since I'm one... But damn, man, this just isn't cool with the story name and the characters listed.
Old story, but I honestly can't believe you could ruin your own story so fast. You NAME your story Harry and Gabrielle yet now add Hermione AND she's even the MAIN LOVE INTEREST!?
Four long chapters of an ambiguous relationship between Harry and Gabrielle which, mind you, you would think could have progressed into love after many months around and sleeping with each other, EVEN IF the bond in this story is more unusual... Which oh, I dunno, would've been NICE considering the title...
Like, are you kidding me? You're clearly not an idiot based on the fact you can write and have a good vocabulary and knowledge, so how is that even a good idea? I can't fathom it. I honestly wish I could get hours of my life back to prevent the crushing disappointment of something I was enjoying.
I don't ever like bashing authors since I'm one... But damn, man, this just isn't cool with the story name and the characters listed.
4/18/2019 c6 NazgulBelserion
Perfect and then you added Hermione and ruined it I was expecting a special relationship between Harry and Gabby and you had to add the book worm
Perfect and then you added Hermione and ruined it I was expecting a special relationship between Harry and Gabby and you had to add the book worm
3/25/2019 c6 Custos Lupus
I enjoyed the story. It had a lot of good plot elements and was easy to follow. The only thing I could wish for to make it better was for there to have been a sort of epilogue to tell what happened instead of such an abrupt end.
I enjoyed the story. It had a lot of good plot elements and was easy to follow. The only thing I could wish for to make it better was for there to have been a sort of epilogue to tell what happened instead of such an abrupt end.