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6/16/2014 c8 sisteria27
Great chapter

Bella is doing good bringing them all together. Jacob is so smitten its cute.

Cant wait for more.
6/15/2014 c8 1hufflepuffpride21
At least you can admit your mistakes :) hope to read more soon
5/7/2014 c7 Hapsgurl80
Awesome story so far please update soon
5/1/2014 c1 Guest
The story has a decent premise.
Your grammar, punctuation, word usage and sentence structure is horrible. I am not being critical of the story. But the way its structured makes this unbelievably difficult to read. I am guessing that english may not be your first a beta reader would help.
Either way part of being a writer is to use language & grammar properly. The story would become much more readable & therefor more enjoyable.
4/5/2014 c11 anglictash
I'm still here with you love, you'll geyt there!
4/5/2014 c11 Guest
I hope u write more soon ;)
4/4/2014 c11 1Liz schulze
I don't hate you but, if you don't write fast I will. Also get a beta to fix your grammar.
-liz
4/3/2014 c11 emsalter32
Try not to overthink it,it will come to you xxx
4/3/2014 c8 17Child of Dreams
(frowns)
If Bella's inviting the entire pack, then she forgot about Jared, Brady and Collin!
4/3/2014 c11 5laugh0ften2012
Don't worry about people hating you keep trying and post when your ready. Your story is very unique and very interesting and worth the wait.
3/20/2014 c10 natashar
cant wait for more
3/20/2014 c10 1Taino Delsan13
Damn poor Paul only been 6yr old and he been going through all that. How lil bella heard lil paul cry for help?great job until next chapter thank you for updating
3/20/2014 c3 Guest
ck
3/19/2014 c9 4YaleAceBella12
Please write more...
3/18/2014 c9 2alixandria
Ok
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