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5/19 c5 Guest
I stopped reading around here bro the fact that he's so hung up on f****** Sakura I can't read it his retarded ass crush on Sakura in Canon is one of the things I do not like in Canon not Narutoverse so I don't want to read it in fanfiction.
5/11 c3 yourfoxydope
cringe
3/21 c24 akirathewolflord
I hope you pick this back up, it's a good story, a few errors but those are mostly messed up sentences like 1 or 2 repeated words like the sentence being started twice or missing a word here and there
3/18 c10 13electro prime
chapter 10 the first part needs to be spaced out
2/29 c24 L3onidas
Always hate it when the last chapter is an authors note lol Hope you get back soon or have some material lying around on your computer that you can post
2/17 c1 djtdagreat
I'm holding out you may come back and keep going with it
12/21/2023 c1 mac1010
your a good writer and the idea is good but HOLY ANGST fuck off bro stop crying and letting people bitch him around
10/18/2023 c24 bigdog21
Really hope you come back to this story sometime. It has been one of my favorites for a long time. I always liked that the change from Canon naruto to this versions felt plausible to me. Grief can make someone into an entirely different person. Well here's hoping for an update some time in the future
8/29/2023 c24 hqjkat
i hope you can get back to writing it again. it was a good story.
8/15/2023 c24 Username6166
I hope you come back to this one day
6/1/2023 c24 LizudemAm
What I like about this fic is you characterized your protagonists good. Nothing really felt illogical or idiotic. Everything that came close to "bothering" me were nitpicks I can easily ignore.
I really enjoyed this story so far and would love to see another chapter.
5/26/2023 c4 kevinthegoat0304
Naruto doesn’t need the ring to fly
5/16/2023 c24 1Simmonschr
can you hurry up and make more chapters of this fic I'm starting to get disappointed
5/11/2023 c5 jzblue
I keep rereading this story. soo good. I hope it continues soon
4/27/2023 c2 Mister nobody 23
The planet's name ajnin is ninja spelled backward
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