for Light and Shadow6/1/2023 c24 
2LizudemAm
What I like about this fic is you characterized your protagonists good. Nothing really felt illogical or idiotic. Everything that came close to "bothering" me were nitpicks I can easily ignore.
I really enjoyed this story so far and would love to see another chapter.
2LizudemAmWhat I like about this fic is you characterized your protagonists good. Nothing really felt illogical or idiotic. Everything that came close to "bothering" me were nitpicks I can easily ignore.
I really enjoyed this story so far and would love to see another chapter.
5/16/2023 c24 1Simmonschr
can you hurry up and make more chapters of this fic I'm starting to get disappointed
1Simmonschrcan you hurry up and make more chapters of this fic I'm starting to get disappointed
4/27/2023 c2 Mister nobody 23
The planet's name ajnin is ninja spelled backward
The planet's name ajnin is ninja spelled backward
4/11/2023 c24 Guest
Please continue to do your best to make more chapters and don’t give up on yourself on this project and do not listen to to bad post reviews and you I greatly imagine
Please continue to do your best to make more chapters and don’t give up on yourself on this project and do not listen to to bad post reviews and you I greatly imagine
3/27/2023 c1 Guest
I'm sorry, but I'm dropping the story as soon as the third chapter. Naruto has been character assassinated for me due to his "love for Sakura". Personally, I'm not too fond of it when people use Naruto's nature and try to change him into some random person that isn't Naruto. It would be different if the story over time changed him but right off the bat, Naruto straight up denies his reason to become Hokage initially for Sakura. Sorry, but this story isn't for me.
I'm sorry, but I'm dropping the story as soon as the third chapter. Naruto has been character assassinated for me due to his "love for Sakura". Personally, I'm not too fond of it when people use Naruto's nature and try to change him into some random person that isn't Naruto. It would be different if the story over time changed him but right off the bat, Naruto straight up denies his reason to become Hokage initially for Sakura. Sorry, but this story isn't for me.
1/31/2023 c22 1MrPlatinum07
I think you're embellishing Batman's paranoia a bit too much, something I've always seen in Naruto/Young Justice crossovers a lot
1MrPlatinum07I think you're embellishing Batman's paranoia a bit too much, something I've always seen in Naruto/Young Justice crossovers a lot
1/12/2023 c24 kageknuser2710
This has been an amazing read, I really hope the author comes back at some point.
This has been an amazing read, I really hope the author comes back at some point.
1/12/2023 c23 kageknuser2710
Though, giving Faust to Adam... Might actually be much better. Nice touch!
Though, giving Faust to Adam... Might actually be much better. Nice touch!
1/12/2023 c23 kageknuser2710
I am so incredibly mad he didn't let Isis kill him off. Fucking bullshit.
I am so incredibly mad he didn't let Isis kill him off. Fucking bullshit.