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12/9/2014 c14 Madamexx
Hahaha Beth's pretty funny. You can tell she just loved doing that. :D
So now she knows about Aro and Anna. I'm curious to see what she does with this information And I liked the little backstory with Anna and Beth.
12/9/2014 c13 Madamexx
Oh cool, there's going to be a masque. I love those. :D
I'm glad to see Aro going after Anna too.
12/9/2014 c12 Madamexx
I think it's really cool you placed this at Whitby. I love Dracula and I always think of Mina following Lucy into the cemetery at night.
12/8/2014 c11 Madamexx
They left? Somehow though, I get the feeling Aro and Anna will see each other again. :D

"And there it was: crumpled, but otherwise unharmed, like a beautiful snakeskin."

I love this simile. It's so visceral and it's cool how it eludes to Darius, yet has beauty.
12/8/2014 c10 Madamexx
Hahaha Beth just says whatever comes to her mind, doesn’t she? Forget tact and go for candor. :D
Somehow, I get the feeling though it’s going to get her into trouble. Everyone can read her emotions like a book.

I think it’s actually kind of sweet the way Aro watches over Anna. He may have an ulterior motive, but I think he would take good care of her. In fact, I honestly don’t see Aro as needing Chelsea that bad (except for maybe Jane and Alec) because of his smooth way of charming people. A lost vampire with no friends would probably look at Aro’s invitation into the Volturi as a blessing.
12/6/2014 c9 Madamexx
You know I have a love for horror, so I thought the Darius chapters were really cool. He so dark and single-minded. Yet it was quite satisfying to see Aro rip off his head. :DDD
What’s going to happen with Anna though? :o
12/3/2014 c6 Madamexx
LOL Demetri’s always lovely antagonistic, isn’t he? Now I’d love to see him and Beth get together.
11/29/2014 c5 Madamexx
I think it’s lovely the way Aro reached out to her to read her mind. . Anna is taking a leap of faith by letting Aro in. It’s really quite sweet.
11/29/2014 c1 Madamexx
Excellent start! You pulled me right in with Anna and Beth’s story, hinting at their gifts and each of their personalities, blending it in with the action. :D
6/9/2013 c25 3bats13
Ooooh I loved it! I'm a sucker for romance, so all of these Anna/Aro moments just make me swoon! lol Great job on the story, I can't wait until you post the sequel, I will definitely be reading!
6/8/2013 c15 bats13
OMG! That's what I was thinking when they kissed! I was SO not expecting that! I'm so happy for them! Now to read what happens at the ball!
6/7/2013 c1 bats13
I'm really liking this first chapter! After reading the first few paragraphs, the story just drew me in, and I can't wait to read what happens next! I really like your style of writing, some parts almost sound like poetry, like the way you compare things. Like when you said she felt the memory slip off her, like a frosted veil. That was really good! Memory can feel like that, huh? Do you write poetry? If not, you definitely should, you would be awesome at it! I don't normally read Twilight fics, but yours I already love, and it's only been the first chapter!
6/2/2013 c25 Savysnape7
Oh god I about cried this was so sweet and sad I LOVED IT!
6/1/2013 c25 Victoria Cullen 39
at is a good last chapter so for I love it a lot and I cant wait for the sequel to be put up and all at big time
4/29/2013 c24 Marmite-1
Such an awesome story, I can't wait to read the sequel :D
I actually really like the idea of Beth and Demetri...but if you chose Marcus and Beth -that's cool too :D
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