for The Lost Souls10/25/2012 c9 Victoria Cullen 42
wow good chapter so for i love it a lot and i cant wait for a new chapter to be put up and boy i bet aro is sartering to fall in love with anna in this stoire big time
wow good chapter so for i love it a lot and i cant wait for a new chapter to be put up and boy i bet aro is sartering to fall in love with anna in this stoire big time
10/25/2012 c1 
1Jox Miller
I think you did nice job on the story. I also like the character development.
1Jox MillerI think you did nice job on the story. I also like the character development.
10/13/2012 c8 Victoria Cullen 42
wow good chapter so for i love it a lot and i cant wait for a new chapter to be put up and wow anna kick darius butt in this stoire big time
wow good chapter so for i love it a lot and i cant wait for a new chapter to be put up and wow anna kick darius butt in this stoire big time
10/5/2012 c7 Victoria Cullen 42
good chapter so for i love it a lot and i cant wait for a new chapter to be put up boy aro wife is not nice in this stoire put bet aro is falling in love with anna in this chapter boy i dont kown wow long anna going to fall in love with aro put i hope not going to take long for her big time
good chapter so for i love it a lot and i cant wait for a new chapter to be put up boy aro wife is not nice in this stoire put bet aro is falling in love with anna in this chapter boy i dont kown wow long anna going to fall in love with aro put i hope not going to take long for her big time
9/22/2012 c6 Victoria Cullen 42
good chapter so for i love it and i cant wait for a new chapter to be put up and i bet at aro is sarte falling in love with anna in this stoire and i bet anna is two i hope at aro whated to get to kown anna and all at big time
good chapter so for i love it and i cant wait for a new chapter to be put up and i bet at aro is sarte falling in love with anna in this stoire and i bet anna is two i hope at aro whated to get to kown anna and all at big time
9/17/2012 c5 Victoria Cullen 42
wow good chapter so for i love it a lot and i cant wait for a new chapter to be put up and its a good thing at aro look in anna mind and i bet aro is falling love with anna and same with her in this stoire i bet marcus see a true mate mod in this stoire i bet hes not going say someing to aro about at one i bet he wahted aro and anna fager it put in this stoire big time
wow good chapter so for i love it a lot and i cant wait for a new chapter to be put up and its a good thing at aro look in anna mind and i bet aro is falling love with anna and same with her in this stoire i bet marcus see a true mate mod in this stoire i bet hes not going say someing to aro about at one i bet he wahted aro and anna fager it put in this stoire big time
9/16/2012 c5 2Black Star 145885
I love it and I'm glade we know what the Volturi wants to do with her and that Aro was able to read her mind!
2Black Star 145885I love it and I'm glade we know what the Volturi wants to do with her and that Aro was able to read her mind!
9/14/2012 c4 Victoria Cullen 42
good chapter so for i love it a lot and i cant wait for a new chapter to be put up
good chapter so for i love it a lot and i cant wait for a new chapter to be put up
9/11/2012 c3 Victoria Cullen 42
wow good chapter so for i love it a lot and i cant wait for a new chapter to be put up and aro wahteds anna bady boy i bet anna is aro mate in this stoire and its a need glft at she has big time
wow good chapter so for i love it a lot and i cant wait for a new chapter to be put up and aro wahteds anna bady boy i bet anna is aro mate in this stoire and its a need glft at she has big time
9/10/2012 c3 Mel
This is great! Your writing style is flawless and very engaging. I am a huge fan of the Volturi and I hope that you showcase some more of the guard :) Beth is great! She is funny and a strong character. Anna's power looks like it controls her rather than the other way around which seems scary. I look forward to the next chapter.
:)
This is great! Your writing style is flawless and very engaging. I am a huge fan of the Volturi and I hope that you showcase some more of the guard :) Beth is great! She is funny and a strong character. Anna's power looks like it controls her rather than the other way around which seems scary. I look forward to the next chapter.
:)
9/8/2012 c2 Victoria Cullen 42
good chapter so for i love it a lot and i cant wait for a new chapter tro be put up
good chapter so for i love it a lot and i cant wait for a new chapter tro be put up
9/8/2012 c1 1YellowParchment
A lovely start, beautifully written. It's nice to see some originality in a fanfiction for once. Can't wait for updates, keep up the good work :)
1YellowParchmentA lovely start, beautifully written. It's nice to see some originality in a fanfiction for once. Can't wait for updates, keep up the good work :)
9/7/2012 c1 2Black Star 145885
I LOVE IT, PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I'm very curious as to what is Anna's power.
2Black Star 145885I LOVE IT, PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I'm very curious as to what is Anna's power.