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11/25/2018 c1 reptoholic
Hope he gets op!
9/30/2018 c9 1AnkoUzumaki
I really like where this story is going and I hope that you will update it soon
6/16/2018 c9 1gabelou1991
J'aime beaucoup tes 2 dernier chapitre.
6/15/2018 c9 Xemenon
great so far. hope that you are able to update the story.
3/25/2018 c9 Thanks covid2020
please update this fanfic is fucking way too awesome to be left in the dust
3/10/2018 c9 ByUzumaky3000
Me gusta la historia, y apoyo para el harem a kyuubi y a sanbi, además de que quiero pedirte que incluyas a konan, guren, samui y yugito
2/5/2018 c9 KEVIN
More please
1/22/2018 c9 christopherrhaydon
AWESOME work update ASAP!
1/5/2018 c9 13N7 Greek-Valkyrie
Wawawah. The plot thickens. Please continue.
1/4/2018 c7 Hmason
don't ever use that catchphrase again
1/4/2018 c6 Hmason
i did like how you gave him wood style because it's awesome and plausible after all he is an Uzumaki and they are cousins of the Senju, he just need a jumpstart
12/13/2017 c9 scorpin17
love it
11/28/2017 c1 Fuck You
You're really retarted. You know that people hate the way you swap the quotation marks, but you still do it. You are so retarded.
11/10/2017 c9 Guest
Hey I love the way you've wrote the story so far and I'm very impressed you've tried to keep it going here and there. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. Keep on, keeping on, my friend
10/30/2017 c1 6Black Flame of Destruction
i have a small problem with your writing. First off when you have characters speak you put this ' which is an apostrophe and is used to indicate Possession or the omission of letters or numbers. When a Character speaks the symbol that should be used is what your using for when they're thinking which is ", that's a quotation mark which is used to set off direct speech. When thinking i've always believed that typing the thoughts in italics is best in order to differentiate speech from thought. If i were you i would go through this story and fix this issue to make the story more fluid and sensicle because reading this i thought that everytime a character was thinking they were actually talking and i'm sure many other people have had that same problem with this story.
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