for Naruto Guardian Of The Mist3/10/2018 c9 ByUzumaky3000
Me gusta la historia, y apoyo para el harem a kyuubi y a sanbi, además de que quiero pedirte que incluyas a konan, guren, samui y yugito
Me gusta la historia, y apoyo para el harem a kyuubi y a sanbi, además de que quiero pedirte que incluyas a konan, guren, samui y yugito
2/5/2018 c9 KEVIN
More please
More please
1/4/2018 c6 Hmason
i did like how you gave him wood style because it's awesome and plausible after all he is an Uzumaki and they are cousins of the Senju, he just need a jumpstart
i did like how you gave him wood style because it's awesome and plausible after all he is an Uzumaki and they are cousins of the Senju, he just need a jumpstart
11/28/2017 c1 Fuck You
You're really retarted. You know that people hate the way you swap the quotation marks, but you still do it. You are so retarded.
You're really retarted. You know that people hate the way you swap the quotation marks, but you still do it. You are so retarded.
11/10/2017 c9 Guest
Hey I love the way you've wrote the story so far and I'm very impressed you've tried to keep it going here and there. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. Keep on, keeping on, my friend
Hey I love the way you've wrote the story so far and I'm very impressed you've tried to keep it going here and there. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. Keep on, keeping on, my friend
10/30/2017 c1 
6Black Flame of Destruction
i have a small problem with your writing. First off when you have characters speak you put this ' which is an apostrophe and is used to indicate Possession or the omission of letters or numbers. When a Character speaks the symbol that should be used is what your using for when they're thinking which is ", that's a quotation mark which is used to set off direct speech. When thinking i've always believed that typing the thoughts in italics is best in order to differentiate speech from thought. If i were you i would go through this story and fix this issue to make the story more fluid and sensicle because reading this i thought that everytime a character was thinking they were actually talking and i'm sure many other people have had that same problem with this story.
6Black Flame of Destructioni have a small problem with your writing. First off when you have characters speak you put this ' which is an apostrophe and is used to indicate Possession or the omission of letters or numbers. When a Character speaks the symbol that should be used is what your using for when they're thinking which is ", that's a quotation mark which is used to set off direct speech. When thinking i've always believed that typing the thoughts in italics is best in order to differentiate speech from thought. If i were you i would go through this story and fix this issue to make the story more fluid and sensicle because reading this i thought that everytime a character was thinking they were actually talking and i'm sure many other people have had that same problem with this story.
10/7/2017 c9 JimJab
I love your story so far. It is great. I hope you keep up the good work and update soon. I cannot wait to read the next chapter.
I love your story so far. It is great. I hope you keep up the good work and update soon. I cannot wait to read the next chapter.