for Naruto Guardian Of The Mist4/26/2017 c3 
1dragonfighter11
That's a ridiculously OOC change in personality. He basically did a complete personality change in like, what, 1 day or so? That's hard to justify, even if he 'can't see his friends' lol
1dragonfighter11That's a ridiculously OOC change in personality. He basically did a complete personality change in like, what, 1 day or so? That's hard to justify, even if he 'can't see his friends' lol
4/26/2017 c2 Banjo the Fox
Well done chapter, though extremely cliche', especially with the final line of the chapter.
Well done chapter, though extremely cliche', especially with the final line of the chapter.
4/26/2017 c9 KamiKageRyuuketsu
way to short of a chapter honestly this is why i really hate/dislike authors who make over a hundred or a thousand stories its because you all cant even focus on the ones you first started and slowly forget about them. delete some and focus on others.
way to short of a chapter honestly this is why i really hate/dislike authors who make over a hundred or a thousand stories its because you all cant even focus on the ones you first started and slowly forget about them. delete some and focus on others.
4/26/2017 c9 coolchick87
I love your story please update it real soon. Thanks. Looking forward to the next chapter.
I love your story please update it real soon. Thanks. Looking forward to the next chapter.
4/26/2017 c1 Elim Garak
"Naruto was slightly upset yet, also happy" - he was slightly upset that he was completely abandoned as a child, and now was being kicked out of the village? That his godfather barely spent a month with him, and had to be coerced into teaching him? What would he feel if somebody betrayed him, stabbed him repeatedly and burned his stuff - become mildly annoyed?
"Naruto was slightly upset yet, also happy" - he was slightly upset that he was completely abandoned as a child, and now was being kicked out of the village? That his godfather barely spent a month with him, and had to be coerced into teaching him? What would he feel if somebody betrayed him, stabbed him repeatedly and burned his stuff - become mildly annoyed?