for Naruto Guardian Of The Mist11/7/2023 c1 Guest
So basically gang nang smut with no plot
So basically gang nang smut with no plot
11/5/2023 c13 
13N7 Greek-Valkyrie
Oh come on this is so good. I can't wait for more, this is going into my favorites and my follow section
13N7 Greek-ValkyrieOh come on this is so good. I can't wait for more, this is going into my favorites and my follow section
7/20/2023 c13 akirathewolflord
I hope this gets picked back up, it is one of the better fics I've read and enjoyed what's here, I'm picky about what I read, if I don't enjoy something within the first few chapters I'll drop it...part of the reason i haven't finished the last wheel of time book yet, it's a bit of a slog to be honest
I hope this gets picked back up, it is one of the better fics I've read and enjoyed what's here, I'm picky about what I read, if I don't enjoy something within the first few chapters I'll drop it...part of the reason i haven't finished the last wheel of time book yet, it's a bit of a slog to be honest
1/30/2023 c13 MrNovak
Very interesting story. You’ve made the op naruto a lot more interesting than most stories I have seen. Although to claim this is a romance genre at this point is a stretch. It has the beginnings; but not much else for that genre.
To comment lightly on the most recent chapter, I think tsunade, jiraiya, gaara, and temari are in for an interesting reunion.
I hope this is continued.
Very interesting story. You’ve made the op naruto a lot more interesting than most stories I have seen. Although to claim this is a romance genre at this point is a stretch. It has the beginnings; but not much else for that genre.
To comment lightly on the most recent chapter, I think tsunade, jiraiya, gaara, and temari are in for an interesting reunion.
I hope this is continued.
1/21/2023 c2 yrlastin
Quotation marks should be reversed! "for talking" and 'for thinking'.
Please correct this it would make your fic far more readable.
Quotation marks should be reversed! "for talking" and 'for thinking'.
Please correct this it would make your fic far more readable.
11/17/2022 c2 13Write Your Wrongs
Oh my fuck, you don’t freak out when you kill someone and start questioning whether or not you’re a monster, I hate that fucking trope. Sure, you usually start shaking, doubting your morals, and have nightmares and shit, but the freaking out is such an over exaggeration. That, and the vomiting, those are such dumb cliches.
13Write Your WrongsOh my fuck, you don’t freak out when you kill someone and start questioning whether or not you’re a monster, I hate that fucking trope. Sure, you usually start shaking, doubting your morals, and have nightmares and shit, but the freaking out is such an over exaggeration. That, and the vomiting, those are such dumb cliches.