for Naruto Guardian Of The Mist10/19/2015 c8 
3Acolyte of the Blood Moon
Awesome fight and story in general, I love this Naruto. As fo the harem, I like it, though I would love it if Yugito got in. Fu is just bonus.
3Acolyte of the Blood MoonAwesome fight and story in general, I love this Naruto. As fo the harem, I like it, though I would love it if Yugito got in. Fu is just bonus.
10/7/2015 c1 1Unslaadtoorjun
Yo! Good so far, definitely gonna have to read this, especially after reading Shatter, Naruto Uzumaki. As for the quotations, there a bit annoying, but, that's just because they're different, and different is good! Really my only real 'problems' with this story are saying their personal names first, and using english names for jutsu and attacks, though they are not gonna stop me from reading.
1UnslaadtoorjunYo! Good so far, definitely gonna have to read this, especially after reading Shatter, Naruto Uzumaki. As for the quotations, there a bit annoying, but, that's just because they're different, and different is good! Really my only real 'problems' with this story are saying their personal names first, and using english names for jutsu and attacks, though they are not gonna stop me from reading.
10/7/2015 c8 1Unknown Eldritch
Great chapter. As for the harem, it seems good. My suggestion for the Bijuu idea is this: It is awesome. Since Naruto x Fem!Kyuubi is a rather common pairing, I wouldnt mind it only being Naruto x Fem! Sanbi, whichis a very rare pairing, not to mention one of my personal favorites. I happily await the next update.
1Unknown EldritchGreat chapter. As for the harem, it seems good. My suggestion for the Bijuu idea is this: It is awesome. Since Naruto x Fem!Kyuubi is a rather common pairing, I wouldnt mind it only being Naruto x Fem! Sanbi, whichis a very rare pairing, not to mention one of my personal favorites. I happily await the next update.
9/10/2015 c8 Guest
Please make it a bigger harem it could be Mei, Ameyuri, 's, , Nibi, Yugito, Samui, Fu, , , Fem. Gobi, Hinata, Konan, Shizune, Shion, Mabui, Hana, Kurotsuchi, Tenten, Ayame, Yugao, Amaru, Isaribi, Anko, Akari, Shizuka, Sara, Tsunami, Kushina, Mikoto
Maybe Karui, Temari, Guren,
Also will he get Crystal, Steel, Scorch and/or Dust?, Crystal would be a stronger version of Earth with Yin chakra
Steel would be the same as crystal but Yang
Scorch is a combination of fire and wind which he has at the moment it doesn't need to be a bloodline for him to have it, he could combine those elements and create it but it would be difficult for him to do it
Dust is a combination of fire, wind and earth which he has so why not let it be like with the Scorch
II was thinking that maybe you could make him get all five main and sub elements by fighting and getting the approval of the other dragons, as well as getting the dragon blade and maybe, really maybe get him go to the lost tower movie and get trapped in the past, there he could develop the Dragon slayer attacks, and go save Mikoto and Kushina from being killed.
Oh I was thinking that maybe he could have the Rinnegan as he is the reincarnation of Asura the Sage's son, he could get a dragon version of Sage mode, it could look like Natsu's dragon Force mode or maybe like a drive.
Please make it a bigger harem it could be Mei, Ameyuri, 's, , Nibi, Yugito, Samui, Fu, , , Fem. Gobi, Hinata, Konan, Shizune, Shion, Mabui, Hana, Kurotsuchi, Tenten, Ayame, Yugao, Amaru, Isaribi, Anko, Akari, Shizuka, Sara, Tsunami, Kushina, Mikoto
Maybe Karui, Temari, Guren,
Also will he get Crystal, Steel, Scorch and/or Dust?, Crystal would be a stronger version of Earth with Yin chakra
Steel would be the same as crystal but Yang
Scorch is a combination of fire and wind which he has at the moment it doesn't need to be a bloodline for him to have it, he could combine those elements and create it but it would be difficult for him to do it
Dust is a combination of fire, wind and earth which he has so why not let it be like with the Scorch
II was thinking that maybe you could make him get all five main and sub elements by fighting and getting the approval of the other dragons, as well as getting the dragon blade and maybe, really maybe get him go to the lost tower movie and get trapped in the past, there he could develop the Dragon slayer attacks, and go save Mikoto and Kushina from being killed.
Oh I was thinking that maybe he could have the Rinnegan as he is the reincarnation of Asura the Sage's son, he could get a dragon version of Sage mode, it could look like Natsu's dragon Force mode or maybe like a drive.
9/6/2015 c7 Antex-The Legendary Zoroark
And so the Guardian of the Mist arises! I wonder...when will he meet Mei and everyone else again? Will they be surprised to see him? And will they still think of him as a traitor like they did in this chapter?
And so the Guardian of the Mist arises! I wonder...when will he meet Mei and everyone else again? Will they be surprised to see him? And will they still think of him as a traitor like they did in this chapter?
9/6/2015 c4 Antex-The Legendary Zoroark
Interesting. Very good so far. If ya ask me, I'd just prefer Mei and Naruto together. No harem. However, if it comes to that, I'll just roll with it.
Interesting. Very good so far. If ya ask me, I'd just prefer Mei and Naruto together. No harem. However, if it comes to that, I'll just roll with it.