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7/4/2022 c1 2Areyem Meyera
Wooops. I lost interest already. Thanks for writing this. Other people seem to enjoy it thigh, so please keep on going.

It just so happened that it’s not my cup of tea.
7/4/2022 c1 Areyem Meyera
I’ve read bad reviews about this, but I’ll give it a chance. Haven’t read anything yet, I hope this ends up fine.
7/3/2022 c13 SPark681
Hmm, seems things are shaping up nicely anyway keep up the great work!
7/3/2022 c2 dreadix
freaking cringe with the dragon's. yep im done with this fanfic.
7/3/2022 c1 dreadix
3 thing's that's wrong here. 1 chakra paper doesn't pickup on bloodline ability's. it just show's the big 5 element's. the finding out if you have a bloodline is mostly if something happen's when you use a jutsu it turn's partially into the conbined element or you awaken it like dojutsu's ext.

2nd, you can't banish a jinchuuriki. you can imprison one or execution via extraction of the tail beast but the leaf wouldn't just let the jinchuuriki go.

3rd, if tsunade's first act as hokage has her banishing the very reason why she came back and take up the hat she would have left aswell.
7/3/2022 c9 demissedwaifu
I still can't believe how rushed this is and how can you make him able to fight Yagura (almost to a stand still pre time skip) and then able to fight/make Itachi flee, and say he's Jonin, JONIN, besides that, I've always liked your stories despite being rushed and a little edgy but sheesh, it would be nice if you could reflect on what i said
7/2/2022 c3 mshade656
no one likes knuckleheaded Naruto ... only dark or grey
7/2/2022 c13 mr1980rivera
Thank you for the enjoyable story I just read it and want to go from first chapter to last thank you for all your hard work and may you find peace in your daily life
7/2/2022 c13 Primarx
didn't like how naruto behaved like a brat. as a person who saw war his interactions with rain genin especially were weird and idiotic. him showing so much of what could be trump cards is also not smart. his talk with ino was amusing though, a pity ameyuri didn't join the conversation too though for an extra effect.
7/2/2022 c13 darth56
it was great to read a new chapter thanks hope more is on the way
7/2/2022 c13 StrongGuy159
Cool chapter continue please.
7/2/2022 c13 Kelvin Wong Jun Sheng
And I thought this story has sank. I'm honestly surprised that this story is updated. Great work, by the way. love the story.
7/2/2022 c2 17nagiten
hmm nice very nice

wonder why naruto didnt stop in to pay his respects to haku? also why didnt he stay at tazuna a bit longer or his ancestors village? also
never made sense to me with the amount of time naruto uses his clone jutsu that it took him son long to realise the advantages i mean he had to be told about it years later really?..i mean really i know they classed him as dumb and more a learner by doing but still for it to take that long and after hundreds of clones cast in just a few days let alone how many he did until the exams is just baffling but of course most of the time he hardly used them for other things so they didnt get the to do the info dump but still and for no one to tell him untill then is stupid. naruto could and should bene jonin in power or at least skill by the exams if not the sasuke retrival arc and his brief training with pervy sage. and then near kage level by time of his return i mean gara was kage level by then and he is like naruto just since it was known garra was the former kage kid he became it and was loved and feared and trained to the best of his abillites yet naruto wasnt and he even had his father last remaining student as his teacher and nothing really comes of it cause of star poster boy sasuke i mean really? it called naruto not sasuke. he has the tailed beast his father and mother legacy of which he only really learns how to use his fathers legacy and the uzumaki powers arent even given to him apart form the healing and long life no charka chains no sensory powers nothing with the chains and clones and rasegan naruto even without kurama would of been a powerhouse and juggernaut to trounce everyone in the exams but no naruto has to overly struggle for everything only for that struggle to all but fade away suddenly and him to just get power up after power quickly cause the creators realised that they stuffed up and the endgame was to closer for naruto do dawdle , also naruto killed before many times before this so why is he so affected? he's killed and seen people killed and seen many bodies? anyway hope u are ok
7/2/2022 c13 Jhenifabray
Continue
7/1/2022 c12 6my 2 guys
that was great keep the chapters coming
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