for Naruto Guardian Of The Mist4/4/2020 c11 Zephyr-Sensei
hahaha aww such a good and intriguing new addition to the Guardian of the Mist tale! I have followed this story for a very long while and was so excited when I saw you updated! Don't worry I'll always be a fan no matter even if you drop this. I will never rush such a good work of art either! Thanks for the great chapter!
hahaha aww such a good and intriguing new addition to the Guardian of the Mist tale! I have followed this story for a very long while and was so excited when I saw you updated! Don't worry I'll always be a fan no matter even if you drop this. I will never rush such a good work of art either! Thanks for the great chapter!
3/16/2020 c11 lou2003us
I really want to see what happens next. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work!
I really want to see what happens next. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work!
3/9/2020 c4 The God of Perverts
Wth would he start peeping? He complains that he has nothing to do but didn't Jiraiya give him a scrolls for fuinjutsu and a book? He could read the book in a few hours to a few days but the scrolls for fuinjutsu could take months to learn even with clones. Plus clones wouldn't be able to help with brush strokes since that is a physical exercise.
Wth would he start peeping? He complains that he has nothing to do but didn't Jiraiya give him a scrolls for fuinjutsu and a book? He could read the book in a few hours to a few days but the scrolls for fuinjutsu could take months to learn even with clones. Plus clones wouldn't be able to help with brush strokes since that is a physical exercise.
3/9/2020 c7 
18Luciendar
This is an interesting story, but Naruto just had too many special powers in my opinion. I like things to be a bit more focused and this feels rushed. Also, the disappearing act seems pointless. Not to mention Naruto's emotional state is all over the place. Nikki offence, but I really think this story needs to be rethought and rewritten with clearer goals in mind.
18LuciendarThis is an interesting story, but Naruto just had too many special powers in my opinion. I like things to be a bit more focused and this feels rushed. Also, the disappearing act seems pointless. Not to mention Naruto's emotional state is all over the place. Nikki offence, but I really think this story needs to be rethought and rewritten with clearer goals in mind.
3/7/2020 c1 2BadReader
No point in reading after ages revealed.
I don't know why people insist on Naruto being 3 years older. He took the graduation test early and failed until he was with his peers. It's not that hard to understand. Lots of ninjas graduated early before. The teachers wanted him out but couldn't just falsify records, despite some trying to claim that in their stories.
Then there is his height. He's short. As short if not more so than the others his age and yet apparently he's three years older? A 15 year old is not that height unless they are deformed.
Skip these stories if you value logic.
2BadReaderNo point in reading after ages revealed.
I don't know why people insist on Naruto being 3 years older. He took the graduation test early and failed until he was with his peers. It's not that hard to understand. Lots of ninjas graduated early before. The teachers wanted him out but couldn't just falsify records, despite some trying to claim that in their stories.
Then there is his height. He's short. As short if not more so than the others his age and yet apparently he's three years older? A 15 year old is not that height unless they are deformed.
Skip these stories if you value logic.